Reflection
Hey guys! Thanks for trying the new beta and leaving feedback, it was really helpful.
Some players liked the new scenes, some were unhappy that Max has been cut for now. I might restore him later as an optional side quest, I actually liked a lot of the writing in the date, but I think the sex scene still needs punching up ,and right now I want to push on to some sexier main quests in Bangkok.
Some players felt the new Malaysia scenes were overlong, considering they didn’t include sex scenes, and this is helpful feedback which I agree with, I’ll make them leaner and meaner in the actual release.
This week I worked on a detailed “beat sheet” plan for the next episode (which I completed this evening). It includes detailed outlines of the new wet t-shirt contest; a new “try out” scene at Hard Cock Cafe; changes to the Connor interview scene (that lots of players didn’t like); and new NPCs and locations.
The beat sheet is 11,076 words, 39 pages. It’s been circulated out to some alpha testers for feedback/improvement and also Thalion the community’s project manager – who is eager to get me back onto a kanban board for you guys – so he can get a feel for size and scope, and give me some guidance on how to structure the next deliverables.
Whew! Okay that’s all for today, I’m gonna eat, get an early night, and get back on it first thing tomorrow. 🦀❤️🔥
Comments (6)
Finally, back to Bangkok 🥳🎈! It's about time we got back to the main quest, and we'll see what changes have been made.
I've just finished the most recent beta, I really enjoyed the changes overall. I would only say that whilst I understand your reasoning I think leaving the Max quest in would still be fine, I also prefer the original curlier, curly hair but that's just my personal opinion
I agree the Max quest should be a sidequest, as that's what it is, a distraction from why Kate is in Malaysia. Unfortunately, the way it's always been presented it doesn't feel like a sidequest, it feels like major content, which I think is why players missed it when it was missing from this latest beta.
Just to voice a counter side to some of the feedback. I personally like a game with porn, not porn with a game Periods of the game that may seem long and with no sex is absolutely not an issue if its interesting
ah of course I'm happy that we have the beta version, it means that the game is progressing and those who play it help Crush to improve it, so they are welcome 😁💕
Io non ho provato la versione beta, di solito non le provo perché preferisco aspettare e giocare ad un gioco quando c'è più materiale, pur restando Patreon ovviamente. Detto questo, ho letto pure io i commenti su Discord e devo dire che mi dispiace perdere la scena con Max, mi era sempre piaciuto anche se estemporaneo (sarebbe bello riarverlo magari nelle prossime totalmente nuove parti in Asia...) e in generale devo dire che pure a me no nn piacciono le scene troppo lunghe senza sesso o cmq qualcosa di piccante o strano diciamo, ad esempio nel gioco le parti della gita al grattacielo con la scalata etc etc l'avevo trovato noiosa ma forse l'unica del gioco, infatti non c'era praticamente nessuna allusione al sesso o simile eheheheh 😁