Pioneer of the Abyss - Second Cover and Chapters 9-12, the third 6.9k words
I went ahead and edited the first post for the series to include the first cover I got for it and this second cover I have below. A second cover that I got just to have a more action oriented cover that I can alternate between when the story reaches Royal Road.
This next post is a total of 6930 words long. Chapters 9-12. Four chapters total this time.
I hope you enjoy.
Click on the following link to check it out:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cThNUXT7WD7M0g0nBUUP228IwFJmKQVZ8pzQ-_GFHIU/edit?usp=sharing
First 9.5k words - Chapters 1-5
Chapters 6-8 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127544659
Chapters 9-12 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127593734
Chapters 13-16 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127626076
Chapter 17 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127677922
Chapter 18 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127682217
Chapter 19 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127692885
Chapter 20 - https://www.patreon.com/posts/127696837
Comments (19)
Please warp time and release 20 more chapters
I can't believe I'm saying this but I like this one better than winter wolf! I mean I love the setting and power set, really been looking for a water focused MC and story but I love everything else as well! The writing, setting and character looks great and I'm really liking the progression, it's nice that she actually has to work to get a level rather than other stories where MCs are just instantly leveling up, it makes the grind to skill levels so rewarding. Thank you for this story!
Oh, forgot to say this but for a very long time I’ve been hoping to find an aquatic litRPG that I could really sink my teeth into and enjoy greatly but I hadn’t found one I truly enjoyed until this so I’ve got to say thank you :)
Mints are nice, especially the winter green kind. Also your new project/hobby has got me hooked. Pun not intended till I realized it was one and it became intentional
YOOOOO, that new cover is fucking RAD! I love it! 🔱
Really enjoying story so far, curious to see what skills she gets and how her bloodline develops. Really looking forward to more reactions from people watching and also how people to react when her bloodline is revealed and that’s it the result of 2 merging.
I don't think people will find out that it the result of 2 merging unless she tells them.
This is awesome! I do hope for more! Really liking the underwater adventure style!
I pray for more.
༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ more..... Likey likey<3
This is probably the best start to a new story that I’ve ever read Congratulations Wolfshine! You just beat George R. R. Martin’s and his The Song Of Ice And Fire for best start to a story! Keep it up!
Here I was thinking I'd have to wait until Monday for me since normally you take a weekend day off. Can't wait for more
That's because writing this story is pretty much a hobby for me. I'm spending my free time on my day off to write it because I'm rather passionate about it. I'm still writing more chapters right now and may even post more by the end of the day.
Vairy curious what the next skill will be??
This cover reminds me a lot of the Azarinth Healer covers. Very good!
Love this cover more then the other one
The week ends on a high point! Thanks for writing!
Great cover!
Glorious