March 20, 2023

[Ep 1.18] Final tweaks

Hey guys!  Last week I rewrote the uncoöperative sex scene.  Stripping it down to the basics seemed to work.  (I was trying too hard to make it sexy in the original version.)  I also wrote a first draft of the 'coda' scene that a few contributors thought the episode needed.

I shared the new version of the episode with a few contributors and got some good feedback.  There are still a few tasks on the list before it's ready to release:

– There are some art assets that have been supplied by Victoria but not yet added into the game

– There's some rough text and placeholders that need editing

– Feedback received yesterday from xGrotesq and Behbeh needs to be implemented

– The second half of the episode needs some general editing for pacing and dialogue


These things are all straightforward and typical, the normal pre-flight stuff that needs to happen before the episode can go out the door.  Expect it Soon™.


Okay, that's it for now, I'm gonna get straight onto coding in art assets.

Comments (2)

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Juan Homa · March 20, 2023

Can hardly wait….

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Juan Homa · March 21, 2023

To be honest: While waiting I replayed the whole story. Damn what a hot experience! How slowly but well paced the tension is raising - and ebbing…. Finger licking good stuff! Thanks for this! Oh and please hurry 🖖🏼