Reflection
Hey guys, thanks so much to everyone who played last week’s beta and gave me feedback, either in the community or in DMs.
Like I said, I worked really hard on it. I was pleased that most people seemed to like the scene and thought it was hotter than usual. Several players messaged me with constructive criticism and specific suggestions for improvements, which I really appreciated. I’ll definitely squeeze in some of these changes.
The main feedback was to move the story forward to Bangkok, and this is now what I’m working on. The new writing techniques I developed for last week’s beta are already being used in the next episode. I’m in a really exciting, excited creative place right now and I am hard at work on the next ep! Meanwhile our illustrator lovely Victoria is working on art updates created by the beta.
Okay gotta finish for the day but I’m gonna get straight back on it in the morning! 🦀❤️🔥
Comments (1)
Hey, dont know if you read the patreon comments at all, but just wanted to say that I am really happy with the updates and the writing style, you have a knack for making something so mundane sound sexy I am happy that you feel like you are making progress, as I know from previous posts that you were struggling with the writing. I have been here for well over 6 years and will be here for as long as you make updates to this game or make other games. The setting, writing style, art style is S Tier! But yeah, keep up the good work Crush and Victoria!