A Hero's Rebirth Ch. 06 Discussion
So now that Chapter 6 has been out for a bit. What are your thoughts? Anything you'd like to discuss about it?
Comments (4)
This is my absolute favorite story of yours. It's captivating and compels the reader to keep going. Smut aside, I think you've done a superb job with this one! Keep up the good work.
From one of Thomas' conversations with the wind elemental, it sounds like the "Flappers" force elementals to fight. Similar to dog fighting on Earth. When i read that part I wondered if that will get Thomas' attention in the future. Maybe after Kathra has bean dealt with?
So, a slight misunderstanding here, the "Flappers" and the others don't use elementals like pokemon, dogs or chickens for dog-fights, cock-fights or "pokemon battles"... they use them as soldiers on the battlefield as soldiers.
A very good chapter, you take the time the time to develop each character and each day is filled with a new event or encounter. Nothing fills rushed, that's great. And the resulting size of each release is impressive. The reminder of the characters at the beginning is great, but you could make it shorter. You could stop at "role" IMO. I liked a lot the progression with Amura. This slow burn is refreshing as compared to the way the relationships evolve with all the other matrons. Good idea to introduce the "need to release" for our hero to justify BJ from the girls. It opens the way to other form of releases. Too early to have an opinion with the cloud elves encounter. It won't be a walk in the park but that was to be expected. Interesting to have this dark elf spy roaming around. Is she just there to remind us that the clock's ticking or will she play a greater role? A second dark elf in Thomas' house? To make it short: great work, keep it up! 😉