Next Chapter?
I just sent Too Good To Be True Chapter 29 to my Editors. It was surprisingly hard to write since I was re-writing and abandoning a few chapters that.... just didn't feel right to me anymore. I don't know if I've said this before, but most of "Too Good To Be True" was written over a year ago and was the first erotica I wrote. I realized I was writing it more for me, as the author, and it was lacking a lot for readers. So I made the decision to fix that since I didn't like it.
Bry1977 should be starting his work editing it within a few days and my new editor, thegoofyproofyreader, is working through the story to catch up and do his work.
Which brings us to the matter of the next chapter. I figured we have new people, and it's been a while, so... Which story should I work on next?
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Which chapters were rewritten/abandoned?
I had an alternate chapter 29, and had chapter 30 and 31 written as well. But, as I said before, they were written when the only intended audience was... me. So I didn't have to develop the characters in the story, because they were fully developed already for the story. I think that's one reason a lot of people have said the harem is too bloated, and I need to pair down. Because I wasn't trying to develop the characters for other audiences. Having realized that, I'm redoing it with an actual intended audience other than myself.