Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 3
I wanted to get Scratch's intro finished before the end of the month.
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I love Scratch's design, the scrunkly, rough, and mysterious ally cat vibe is rarely depicted among male feline anthros. It's a concept that gets overlooked way too often.
Ah! He seems to have a-void-ed her..!
So in your mind do you hear sexy sax music play in the background as she tries to wrangle him in only for it to abruptly stop and then hear the sound of him speeding away on the bike?
:D
Is Brooke maybe developing some trust issues??
She's always had them, they come packaged with the Daddy Issues
🤣
Men love my pits!!! Right!? Ex lover: Well... uh.... it wouldn't hurt to put on a little bit of cologne...
Ha! This page is hilariously great! Nice work with the page composition here. The top and bottom panels mirroring each other work well for bookending the page, and Maya being in the same position while Brooke changes facing is a nice contrast. And Brooke's look at the end is funny and fun! Excellent expression and great posework to show her emotions. It's great that you can do intense looks so well! Speaking of Brooke, damn you made her look sexy in the middle! Again the posework is fantastic! It's impressive you can make a fully clothed character sexier than most actually naked furry porn online. Plus details like the sweat and musk effects were great touches. You really have a talent for conveying olfactory details in your art! It'd be great to see how far you can go with it! Lastly, great work with the dialog! The last panel is hilarious! Surely there are dozens of college guys that would line up for those pits. On top of that, you're good at showing characters' attitudes with their dialog. Scratch's curt lines really set him apart from Brooke's lines for instance. And great use of different font sizes plus font effects like bolding and italics for emphasis. Seems like things aren't getting any easier for Brooke. Interested to see where it goes from here!
Brooke has an itch she could not Scratch.
Ooh! Good one.
He a loyal one, you’ll get your own brookie
Yep and then to make sure he's loyal all her friends are going to hit on him upon first meeting him, because that's what good friends do. Hell maybe they'll bone him, multiple times, just to be sure. I hope she stays single forever and I hope Polly kicks her out. What she did totally triggered me, lol.
My dude aint a simp
Not a chance… lol
That third panel is prime material for a standalone piece, I think.
I think men love your ass more Brooke.
Scratch: K byeeeee
Scratch a good dude Brooke needs to get laid
I was thinking the same thing. How long has it been now? A month?
Hmm I believe Brooke is being meta with that last comment hehe, also scratch looks like an space mercenary in that biker outfit. Super 😎
Wow. That's not a red flag at all, Brooke. Hard to believe you're single....
Brooke is becoming kaori. That’s called full circle folks
Scratch is well aware of Who lives in that Den...
She just wants that shadow-wang.
All in favor of the #StinkyPittyCommittee?
Not me. That ain't much that's a bigger turn-off for me than B.O.
Dang Scratch is too loyal XD
Lol