Brooke Goes To College part 5 page 2

There’s nothing quite like getting absolutely hammered by a silhouette

I like the cut of his gib 😼

Bro is a whole shadow

Kinda reminded of The Stig.

Calling that man Darkrai. Dude is a shadow that knocks you out like a light 🫡

Good guy Scratch~

Let’s go!!!

The surfacing of Scratch the biker. I like it.

Great to see this chapter kicking off with a bang! Also, good job handling the change between pages. The thin house shot first works like an establishing shot in a movie, and it being small means it doesn't take up space from the rest of the page. And showing Brooke still sweating at first is a nice detail to convey how this page continues from the last one. Things like this really show off your talent for comics and experience with them since these kind of little things people might not even think of but really make it flow much more smoothly. And great work with Polly and Scratch! Her drooling look and all the hearts are nice details to show how much she's enjoying it. Nice work with the scratch marks too, they're varied enough to look natural. And really interesting work with Scratch's fur and tail, his fur flying everywhere and tail breaking the panel border make him look even more wild. Also Maya's commentary is hilariously great! The final shot is an interesting one too. Scratch having more cat-like eyes makes him look more wild as well. Plus the helmet has very neat furgonomics for the ears! That's a fun little touch; it's always great to see details like that in furry settings! Thanks again for sharing your work Jay! Looking forward to seeing where this goes from here!

Cat caught the mousie...

All I keep thinking is a line from a Digital Underground song “You're taxin' it and waxin' it and workin' it around 'Til the booty starts makin' that clappin' sound” Love it as usual Mr. N 😁

Was wondering when he’d show up in the story

Such a wholesome couple, also is he a biker?

The Void beckons

I like scratch's design...Hope he gets a Harem. All the badasses deserve a Harem 😎

I hope to achieve this type of love someday

Don't know why but I'm getting a fisk or Thomas sort of vibe off him, is it just me that has a weird sense or does anyone else see it