Greatures, 147 alternate take

Originally drawn in my sketchbook as the 3-panel joke, I took it to page and stretched it out a bit, but it didn't have the juice! So here's my work anyway as I spent an evening inking the thing and am still pretty happy with that part. No editing, no white-out, just the inks and some pencils. Never be afraid to throw out the shit that don't work for you.