Chapter 15.2 Status Report (5)
I’m finally writing the last scene of the chapter, which can play out in two different ways. The artwork is finished, and all that remains is to edit and polish the illustrations for one of the scenes. I think I’ll need about a week to finish writing the chapter, and after that, all that will be left is playtesting, reviewing, and doing some final editing on the text.
The extra scene I wanted to add has ended up taking considerably more work than I expected, as I’ve had to account for a huge number of variables that can become tangled together in all sorts of ways. At this point, in many instances, for every line a player reads in a given playthrough, there may be four to eight other lines hidden from view. That makes writing, and especially structuring, certain scenes a real challenge.
After the writing is done I'll finish the playtesting and get everything ready for release, hopefully I’ll have the update ready within the next two weeks, or before the end of September at the latest. It’s always difficult to estimate how much work and complexity certain parts of development will require, but I can’t wait to share with you what I’ve been cooking.
There’ll be some action again in this upcoming update. Who do you think Ian will face in the tournament?
Comments (33)
Patiently awaiting
Are there any plans for curvy/bbw characters? As well as sex with milf and gilf?
The storyline involving Lena and her ex-boyfriend is truly exciting; Lena once again yields to the charm of her ex-boyfriend Axel. I hope that future versions will include more content about Axel, as he has the ability to take control of everything and is also very handsome.
Hi Eva! My real name Dmitriy (call me Dima)! I created my characters: Ian and Lena (look my avatar) from Our Red String in The Sims 4 (of course, The Sims 2, The Sims 3 as well)! Because, I'm big fan of game: Our Red String! I like this game and I love it so much! Ian and Lena - my favorite characters! Ian x Lena is my loyal relationship, best story and best scenes ever! You did very amazing work! I can't wait for new updates and will be fun! Take your time! P. S.: I hope, I can't wait for more new scenes in future: Lena x Cindy, Ian x Lena x Cindy, Ian x Lena x Emma, Ian x Lena x Ivy, Ian x Lena x Holly x Ivy!
This game is so great that I'm addicted to it too. It would be awesome if Robert is Ian's upcoming opponent.
Really enjoyed playing Lena into a developing “Ivy‘s harem“ storyline/theme. Hoping that that might be an option to continue to develop especially with Allison, Jessica, Cindy, Louise, and Emma. Ivy as the dom ringleader feels fun (although highly unstable)
You’ve done a lot more for Lena’s storyline than Ian’s—since she has twice as many scenes—so it would be cool to add more routes with the existing characters. For instance, maybe include an NTR scenario with Cindy, or other similar things. Also, having a chosen route lead to pregnancy instead of just a standard relationship would open up possibilities for Ian to engage in NTR with other characters as well.
Please read this and do it 😥
Axel isn't a boxer too, is he? lol
He was made in a lab 🧪 .. funniest line from Perry
I really hope we can see Ian take down Axel.
Best of luck! Looking forward to seeing more of Ian and Alison.
Not Alison, ha ha I'm a Lene fangirl
If this is Jeremy we clapping him good! Imma show him how truly BJJ is actually good 😂💀
I played the new Steam update today and overall I enjoyed seeing the relationships gain more depth and move forward, especially the more serious conversations between Ian and Lena and Ian offering to help her. Those moments were really nice. I’ll admit I was a little disappointed by how short the faithful Ian/Lena scene was, though. I don’t usually take Lena down the slut/MMF route, so I was really hoping for a bit more content on the faithful path, especially now that the dominant Ian/Lena dynamic has started getting more interesting. Hopefully we’ll see that side of their relationship develop even further in the next updates. On the other hand, the Dom Ian/Cherry scene was fantastic. That one was on another level. :D There were some good developments across the different routes, and I’m really curious to see where everything goes next. As for the tournament, my guess is Mike. Getting some revenge for what happened with Gillian would be really satisfying, especially if Ian gets the chance to put him in his place. But I can’t lie, watching Ian beat the hell out of Axel would also be extremely satisfying. :D Either way, seeing Chad/Alpha Ian gradually become stronger, more confident and more successful has been one of my favorite parts of his development. I’m also hoping we get plenty of fun and spicy scenes with the other girls as the story continues. Looking forward to 15.2!
What do you mean "put him in his place"? Gillian was the one dating Ian, not Mike. If anything Mike didn't even knew Ian and it's possible he didn't even know Gillian was in a relationship. Gillian is the one who need to be put in her place for being a cheater.
Ian's opponent has to be Mike; same weight class. It'd be nice if Ian and Mike could either be either rivals or friends when they've both have been smashing Lena. We get to decide if Ian and Mike join forces or become enemies. I hope theres a lot of Ian, Lena, Mike, Gillian content to come; seems like a lot can be done plot wise, with all the possible combinations involving these 4 characters. Mike and Ian dominating Lena, when all 3 are on molly sounds friggin hot! Also, I was thinking that Lena should get the option to dominate the likes of Ian and Mike in bed, maybe even use toys, blindfolds, handcuffs. It seems like Lena often likes to be in charge haha. Love the rimjobs so far, so hopefully Mike can get a piece of that too, since it got to a point where he just can't say no to Lena. Lena is his MASTER. Jeremy x Mike x Lena round 3 I bet is gonna be wild! A threesome with Marcel would be BOMB! Will Lena be able to keep Louise as a pet when she is in a relationship with Ian and/or Mike? I wonder.... I always loved those threesomes with Louis. Hoping Ian can share Slut Holly with other guys he befriends, he just needs more interactions with other dudes, especially the ones he can share Lena with. I also expect Ivy to turn on Lena at some point, and I really wanna see Ivy x Mike (maybe Lena walks by and sees them going at it and then she decides to join them or not). I also hope you can bring back Zarina and Billy for some action with Lena and or Ian. Man, this game is fantastic; can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!
“Who do you think Ian will face in the tournament?” Plot twist: Stan!
That would be fun but imo it wouldn't make sense since Stan just started to get in shape
How many more chapters do we have left?
Will we be able to play as Lena in this version?
Damn. I still think it gets faster and faster
I'm assuming the steam version gets updated when the final version of the update is completed? 😊
I’m guessing Mike or Jeremy depending on how one has played up to now. On the growing complexity of writing so many branches I was wondering if you’re thinking that some branches might reach satisfactory conclusions so that you can have fewer to work with as the story progresses? Obviously runs the likely risk of irking people who are heavily invested in those branches, but it was just something I’m curious about in terms of your writing process.
I think the convo/choice trees you design are ridiculously good, do you map them out beforehand or add them as you go?
I can't wait to see Ivy again!
I think Lan is going to fight Mike and discover that Mike's girlfriend is Gillan; a scenario like that could be really interesting. Also, I think it's time for Lan to fight Axel—Axel constantly hovering around Cindy, Cherry, and Lena is getting annoying. A fight with Axel would be the real test of Lan's MMA skills. Furthermore, I'm curious to see how the book contest will change Lan's life—will he become Seyemur's puppet, or will he carve out his own career path? It was great that Cindy finally agreed to be with Lan; I hope we see plenty of her in this update. It would also be amazing to get a scene with the model Zarina—I really hope that happens. Thanks a lot for your hard work, Eva; I hope the new chapter comes out as soon as possible.
Who's gonna tell bro that it's Ian and not Lan 🙆🏽♂️🙆🏽♂️
Thank you for the news update. Take care!
This made me so happy to hear. I'm addicted to this story... Over ,200 hours of play
Can you you put Jake brother in the game, i being honest here he didn't played any role in the previous game ,i though that he gonna play a bigger role in this game instead ,it looks like not the case?
I'm thinking Jeremy maybe?
Hey Eva could you check your dms please? I’ve got an issue that I could use your help with.