Assimilator of Chaos - First 22k Words - Glossary and Chapters 1-10 - Synopsis - Cover

For anyone having trouble reading chapters 1-10 here on Patreon, you can find this one on Royal Road and read them there!

very nice

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Never mind figured out what was wrong by the way I love your books

I can't seem to be able to read assimilator it keeps rejecting any suggestions on how to get it to work

Awesome start! She's cool. Love her look. The mystery that is her past. And of course the skills! Chaos! Can't wait for more!

Ok that’s a good story and I’ve read some of your other books and like it keep up the good work 👍🏼😉

I’d really like if Ashley didn’t actually have any qualms about killing innocent people. For all of your 3 most recent stories, it’s felt like it was just the same person with a different coat of paint in the form of skills. Additionally, I’d really like to see you write someone who just really isn’t a “good” person. I’m not saying they’d go out of their way to kill innocent people for fun, but if the benefits outway the risks, I’d really like to see Ashley just go ahead and do it.

Really like the story, and look forward to more story... and especially more story ART! I can't help but suggest that you check out a book called Siphon, by Jay Boyce, simply because of certain parallels... despite the wide difference in plotlines.

Love the ability and the story itself definitely going to keep reading

Love the story excited for more

Interesting story, would totally read.

Love the story so far, thank you for sharing it with us. 🙂 I think I saw an inconsistency for the skill prices : in chapter 8 she says the first skills of the energy tree cost 5 points, then at the end of chapter 9 she says she can only purchase à single skill with her current 140 points.

Love the story can't wait for more

I like the story so far and excited to read more when you are able to work more on this story. Thank you!

I like it, but personally would prefer longer chapters!

Looks like it'll be a great story

I like the story so far, but I have a question, Does Ashley unlock all the skills unlocked by the user she killed or just the root skill.

The story so far is really good. I like emotional cold MCs without romances the best, but I wonder if she still needs a flying skill for her wings or if she gets a skill by learning to fly, or if it can be done without.

Looks like a good start to the story and I like the concept of assimilating skills, but one minor thing that is bothering me is that ashley kind of just looks like sapphire from rise of the winter wolf with Scarlets color scheme form wolf of the blood moon and with wings added so I just think she needs something to make her more distinct then your other characters

I really like this story so far! Can’t wait for WOTBM to end so this can start up!

Lots of potential in the concept, and I'm looking forward to reading more as you develop this further. My only item of feedback was already covered by SkyGaming224, so nothing more for me to add.

At the end of Chapter 9 she levels up to lvl. 2 but her status screen directly after that still says lvl. 1 The Story itself could be interesting but you still have the problem that all your Main Characters feel largely the same

I like this, the broadcasts are an interesting twist this time around.

A very nice beginning

I like the story so far. I like you are using female leads instead of all those male leads. I just wish you would be abit diverse in the characters. Looking at all your stories. Blood Wolf, Reaper, Crimson all of them is lone wolves and reading these 10 chapters I thought isn't this story abit of a combination of all 3? Im talking about the personalities. All apathetic and (for now) doesn't have any driving force for life itself. She sounds like a victim of bullying that had a meeting with truck-kun and got comatosed. The universe seems huge, like in Crimson, which Im looking forward how your going to spin it with the different 'Primordials'. I raised a questionmark at the end of the story when you wrote about her assimilate of the gargoyle. Did she lose the wolf skill or didn't she? sounded like she could only have like skills from 5 different? or is this just me assuming something? I hope that isn't the case though. It would make her abit weak and she has to hunt for skills knowing which creatures (monsters and people) to hunt.

The story looks quite good so far, I like how the assimilation system is powerful due to its potential and versatility compared to just blindly taking everything from an opponent so she will not become too op too quickly. I do wonder if she kills a user who already unlocked some skills if she also gets those skills unlocked or just the root skill

I liked this story. Looking forward to reading future chapters

I’m liking the story so far, looking forward to more chapters

Looks like it has the chance to be a great story, thanks for sharing it with us.

Seems like a fun premise to run with and is definitely an interesting start. I can’t wait to see where you go with this

1. I love that the MC is nonverbal (or close to it). So rare to see it. Especially for an MC. 2. You have a habit of the character guessing the correct answer/reason for something with little information otherwise given (like at the beginning when she guessed that she was in a coma for about a year, which is way too accurate for a guess, since she doesn’t remember anything before, and there are several reasons she could have muscular atrophy. If she guessed she was in a coma for simply “a while” that would be more believable, imo) 3. I think primordial of judgement should be changed to primordial of order. The others have their own opposites (besides time and the other one I can’t remember the the domain of), and judgement is also a bit subjective (going to ignore the sins and virtues), and also kinda narrow. Order can encompass judgment since punishing/jailing can be considered as maintaining/enforcing order.

I like this story. Hope to see more soon

I thoroughly enjoyed the story. As far as the content goes. The only real gripe I have is the pips for health, mana, and chaos energy. Would it be possible for it to be kept the same, (for setting reasons), and add like 10/10 for the readers? I like the idea thematically, but it's hard to keep up with while reading. This just may be a personal thing. Either of way, love the new story. Already wish there was more!

Cool. Not enough females for these assimilation of skill stories. Could be interesting.

In Chapter 7, the hound Ashley wounds is the one shown using dark bite. The wounded hound takles a guy then the 2nd hound attacks using the dark bite skill. I am confused if both have dark bite or a goof occurred. But it's a great story!

Looks fun

How much more of wolf of the blood moon is there left?