TADC WIP Panels: Ragatha (Bunnydoll comic) PREVIEW
This comic probably wont age well... buuuuuuut fuck it, we're in too deep lads. Originally I had some lore lines in there about how they essentially "conjured" their equipment in the dark, buuuut either Im cutting those lines out or I havent fleshed them out properly since they were just quick notes. I could just hand wave everything like every other smut artist, but we've seen Jax naked, and I thought I was being clever by having an in universe explanation of why they had their junk.
Also you dont want to know how long this is...THE VOICES
Speaking of! yeaahhhh personally I'm not the biggest fan of Jax, but he's just a mess of a character that works really well as a set up, aaaaand damn if I don't like myself a good old fashion hate fuck. but I didn't want to just write him like he projects himself as, I wanted to dig a little deeper and I ended missing the mark by a soooooo much lmao, damn finale.
ANYWAYS. here's some panels I managed to line and color as a nice teaser of the overall story! idk when i'll finish but I'm going as fast as I can and working on some of the other sets as warm ups so I dont lose time. Hope you guys like it so far, hopefully you guys are down for some bunnydoll.
The next poll is this saturday! So get your strategies in order while I keep working on this!
Note: also, I originally had Ragtha with seem lines along her body... I actually kind of liked them, but I think the general preference would of been without, and the swimsuit episode kinda disproved them. Still, I kept them for her boobs. i prfer the patch look instead of buttons.
Poll #2 Saturday June 20th: Lilith Clawthorne, Velma Dinkley, Spectra, Lola Bunny, Rouge the Bat, Susan Long
Comments (15)
We gonna find out why raggedy ann is so ragged
Hot. Love this, Personally I ship Pomni and Ragatha, but Jax and Ragatha, especially how you've lain out, is amazing. Can't wait to see more.
Nonchalant dom is pretty hot for Ragatha. Wish I could see Ribbit in your style too ngl, makes me wonder how you'd tackle the whole "no clothes" thing.
Damn, poor Ribbit man. She got the Jackie Lynn Thomas treatment but worse.. her whole existence is just to show how someone else screwed her over. Personally idk, I enjoyed the scene for what it was but I wasnt sitting there thinking: oh man i cant wait for the lewds from this character. Maybe its one of those things that the fan art has to inspire me instead of the source material. its not like Ragatha where her demeanor and vibe made me wish we saw more of her. Maybe down the line. But for the record it would probably be the same as the explanation Im going to give int his comic for Jax.
Awesome work so far, Hermit! I hope this gets 57 pages! 😆 Now that I know where the plot is going, all of the circus members couldn't have sex & weren't aware how conjuring works until Kinger explained it in episode 8. I wonder if this is before Caine set up the "no sex" rule (thus explains Jax and Caine's reaction to Zooble's sex request in episode 6 🤣) or just Ragatha and Jax sharing a bottle of stupid sauce.
Thanks! and noooooo As for the notes, actually all of those were addressed in the omitted lines and had a work around, but I cut them out bc the actual lines needed more work. Like I said, i may just end up scrapping all of that idea and ignore the nsfw filter like every other smut artist, but its a question of how much effort I want to put in to make it feel plausible.
It’s just so peak I can’t take it anymore. Moth you really are a great artist your artwork always looks so beautiful. Thank you for being amazing Moth we don’t deserve you 🙏🏾 ( But where are the smiles everyone seems so 😔)
Thaaaanks 😁Hopefully it looks better ones its finished, this is just the WIP. I posted this really late on a Thurs night for most people, and its only a WIP, its understandable to for the preview to have less eyes on it 👍
Nice
Why
exactly what i ask myself everyday
I do like the idea of Ragatha being a "Soft Dom" type. Like the kind who is on the receiving end, but is very clearly in control, and is lovingly teaching and praising you the whole time.
Huzzah for The Voices! Keep on listening sir, you're doing great 👍
Peak!!
No other way to describe it