Chapter 5 - Part 3: Week 16 Progress

Hey homies,

Things were a little slower on the rendering side of things this week. I've been much more interested in trying to catch up on the script, and with trying to finalise some last-minute changes I've been mulling over. These changes aren't anything major at all; I'm just attempting to rearrange certain events to hopefully make the climax more impactful. I definitely haven't sorted it all out yet, since I'm still juggling a few of those issues, but overall, it feels like I'm making the right choice with these alterations.

I also decided to cut some of the fat from section 11 again. It was feeling a little bloated in certain sections, and it felt appropriate to try speeding things along rather than lingering. I've had a bad habit of letting conversations drag on in the past, and I'm trying to break the habit. Hopefully, I don't trim too much, but I can always come back later and add more if needed. Although I imagine people will probably want as little filler as possible with this release. 

I can't think of anything else at the moment, so I'll leave it here for today. 
I hope you all have another great week.
Much love
JB