Ninja and the dark cult 2 with dialouge
Well I don't like leave thing half finished. So here the rest of the page.
Any critique are welcome. Sorry for my bad grammar in advance.
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Thank you so much for starting and now finishing your text version!! Attached are some edits:
x.y.z.s = page.panel.text_bubble.sentence not present = no change () = optional [] = pick one {} = comments 7.3 [This is yours / You lost this / Sorry / Apologies] 7.5 It's hurt... => [That hurt... / It hurts...] 8.1 Naughty girl! Bullies deserve [punishment / to be punished]. 8.4 Stay out of this 9.4 DIAGNOSTIC COMPLETE CORE DAMAGE MINIMAL [REGENERATING / REFORMING] OUTER SHELL ESTIMATING TIME FOR REPAIR...
i love youre mtf transformationen!! so sexy good and evil
@ibenz009 Where does the name "Ygoil" come from? I'm not sure if it's a misspelling or a reference to something else.
I just search Lovecraft sounding name in google.
coool
awesome, these additional texts :D
Not bad
Page 9. "DIGNOSTIC COMPLETED" -> "DIAGNOSTIC COMPLETED"
Awsome!
is it missing the final page?
You are right thank! I've fix it.