Liliraune comic sketch page 5-7
Another 3 page sketch are done.
If you found any mistake on grammar or have better suggestion for word choiced feel free to tell me in the comment sorry if I work a bit slow. thank you for you guy patience and still suporting this patreon.
Comments (7)
This is killing it on the story, and that's what counts right now.
I was about to say, there are a good amount of spelling errors, but someone already addressed them lol
Page 7 Panel 1: Whoa....!? Is the nectar making her breasts bigger? Maybe I should drink some... Panel 2: fine Panel 3: fine
Page 6 Panel 1: ....! Damnit, I've tried to ignore it but looks like I'm stuck too.. So much for the use Anna as bait plan Panel 2: fine Panel 3: fine Panel 4: fine
I can see a few spelling errors here and there Page 5 1st panel: Blah Gross it's so sticky! Gah it's getting into my mouth too huh!? 2nd panel: fine 3rd panel: fine 4th panel: Lucia was my hand always this green? It depends, do you want me to sugar coat it? 5th panel: Well I need to go now you can have all of this nectar It's so sticky I can't get out. Nooo Lucia help me, where are you going! See you at the festival
It's looks amazing already! Love how the nectar is cocooning her as well XD
It's got in the first panel