Liliraune comic sketch page1-4
Ok the first four page has been sketch. Want to try something more light hearted.
Well you guy know the drill if you want to help with any mistake on dialouge feel free to post it on the comment. Any suggestion are welcome.
Comments (21)
@ibenz009 I can't believe we're making someone more useless than Aqua from KonoSuba!
I can see a few spelling and gramatical errors but I see you already have had a few offers to help correct that. Gambling Addict and Dumb as a Rock, I look forward to seeing how this turns out :)
Blahbluh!!
Shouldn't the face in the final panel on page four be different from the one before it? If your gonna do that with the line art then nevermind. "Gambling Addicted" seems a bit awkward, you could try "Rampant Gambler" might sound better in that part under the cold acting girl's name.
Compulsive Gambler?
I love the sign
I do too, but what about Stay The Fuck Out?
I hope this actually goes deeper into the Liliraune lore. I love how this is so far!
Verry nice start. Really looking forward to this one!
Is the part of it poking deep at her feet the plant fusing with her already? 🤔
Oh wow,, I already like this a lot. It's rare that there is so much dialogue
Please, let them be good and not evil !!
"dis gon b gud" :unfolds a chair:
So, two liliraune that before you drawn isn't appear this comic?
I have a question. Isn't it sequels of your previous liliraune comic?
No completely new setting.
Very amusing!
Fucking. adorable
It’s already looking amazing. I can message you on discord to help with the spelling if you want?
Sure
比想象的快多了 wonderful！very great picture.