Interlude - Stories
It has been a rough last few days. But I got a chapter done despite it. (26,000 Words)
https://wanderinginn.com/2023/04/01/interlude-stories/
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Comments (11)
Pirate, just commenting to let you know that this is what I would call good writing. You danced across multiple subjects and points of view. You kept a coherent thread while moving multiple plot points forward without getting bogged down. A lot happened and I never felt the need to address my suspension of disbelief. It was one coherent stream that carried me from beginning to end. Please give us more of this and less of the chapters where we drown in one viewpoint. In saying this, I don't refer to chapters involving Erin. I would happily take as much Erin as you can give us. Best of luck resolving whatever digital problems you may have.
Great chapter, P'aba. Thank you. Hope you get your new laptop soon.
I would suggest looking into building the PC yourself. With a little bit of care put into watching compatibility among the parts, and adding them, it is actually like using Legos thanks to the modular design.
This is how they make their money. Time is a valuable resource for some folks and they can't afford to waste it picking out parts.
I scored 20!
hey so i know proxy stuff exists but can i buy gravesong legally somehow (in Germany)
I really hope that computer exploded is not a true event. Thanks for the chapter.
Oh man that is rough, stay safe
yay! early post! just in time to procrastinate work on my thesis!
Computer exploded? I barely knew her!
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