UPDATE: Interlude - The Spitoon
I FORGOT TO WRITE A SCENE. I have written and added it. Few hundred words.
Refresh the chapter or scroll to the end if you've read it already. This is all. It's small...but important.
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I'll take a cheeseburger with fries and a large coke and uhhhhh...
is this the newest chapter not out to free readers yet? I can't find it anywhere.
The link to the chapter is in pirateaba’s previous post.
My goodness. Heretic AI uprising? This story really does have everything.
5hr
First retcon I've seen from Pirate ever! Take your break Pirate. Make it a month. Kick that cold and come back strong. Drink ginger tea(boiled ginger root) and Emergen-C. You'll be over it in no time.
The addition really made a difference to the overall story. Without it this was still a great chapter but disconnected from the overall plot except as a "hey remember this guy?!" moment. The last bit is crucial for setting up possible future plot points.
i wanna be friends w the grand design