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This is the month to watch out for. April is gonna be something. Story-wise, at least. Here's hoping it's a good one. (42,500 Words)
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What a ride, My heart was beating so fast, at times I had to remember to breathe. I cried, I laughed out loud. Most of all, I was on the edge of my seat throughout. Amazing how you wove it all together. Storyteller or Bard, well done. I await the next with bated breath.
I want Ksmvr to use his teammate skills. So bad. As in, please please, let us [Readers of Pirate] see this evolve and see him (Ksmvr) drive up the amount of Linked / shared skills the Horns would be capable of. Also, he should level up simply because he succeeded in seeing his team put back together.
I wanna see Ksmvr duel Klbkch
This chapter was very thrilling and fun to read! But it also felt kind of rushed, like all the individual stories were closed and brought to an abrupt conclusion. And i am wondering why Fetohep didn't use Mass teleport or Greater teleport? Since even Gazi has a scroll, surely the vault should have multiple of those. Instead of running through Chandrar take your best 20-100 men teleport to liscor, hire Named adventurers and get the job done? would save like at least 2-5days assuming the sea travel time.
I assume it has to do with him needing a literal army to go fight other armies with. He is going to end the war AND protect Mersha and the others. Not just protect Mersha. Thus he needs an army.
I really loved this chapter overall however one problem I had with it was seeing Fetohep running and knowing he considers it urgent and relevant but not having a good idea of what he is running towards or why he has to get there so quick.
He’s going to save Erin’s body, because a god has hijacked it. Hence asking necrolad to help out.
How dare you be this good.
Loved the chapter, to say much else would be redundant after all the comments. Yes it was intense, full of ......OMG.... moments. But .... did I miss a chapter? Did we get to see when something took over her? If what i said is a spoiler I'm sorry..... but very curious on what the hell happened in liscor.
We have not. It apparently happened while we were watching the world of the dead
Holy hell what a chapter! what an ending to a Volume!! the end omg i can't wait for the next chapter to come out :)
The best part about this chapter is the stress it managed to evoke. I almost feel like the last part of the chapter should have been a separate one because it killed the amazing pacing. Overall one of the best chapters of TWI I’ve read though.
You have had some great chapters, but this might be the best one yet. I love this story Aba. It's truly unique and I feel really lucky to have been able to watch this develop week by week over the last few years. Keep it up, I'm with you all the way.
Wow, this chapter was a treat! We got some great lore in the beginning , heart pounding action throughout, and we got such a perfect end to the chapter. I am excited for the next volume
Amazing! Loved it!
A Dylan Thomas chapter "Do Not Go Gentle into that Good Night" with a few pages of the Horns glorious chaos added to it! Loved it.
Is this really a good one? I stopped reading after the Seamwalkers. I was so disappointed. A powerful adversary introduced when? 2 Chapters ago? Last chapter? And the hole in reality. Really? She who fights with monsters? Without Jason and Erin? But its good to know that the author likes that Australian chap as well.
Yes it’s good and if you missed the foreshadowing of the seamwalkers (volume 7) you should do some rereading.
Finally, she's back! And with a bag, nonetheless. Ty, pirateaba.
Just finished. Amazing. This arc is going to be great.
Raising my daughter to a kid-safe rendition of your stories. I love your work! Memorable characters that spring off of the page. A creative masterpiece.
I am really interested in what this means. Like censoring swear words? What about all the gore and wars? And how do you handle the Mating Rituals chapters or are those just skipped?
One of my favorite parts of Lord of the rings is when Theoden says, "Let the horn of Helm Hammerhand sound in the deep. One last time." This chapter was 40k words of that feeling
Leaning forwards, nearer the edge of my seat the whole way through! This is... This is going to be a big one.
Holy shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. How am I going to sleep after that chapter
Took me about 2 hrs to read... Hope Erin can carry important information back. Hope that she's ready to roll
Things are getting real.
Hooly 42k!! Cant wait
AHHHHHHH IT WAS SO GOOD
Soooooo stoked!!!
Just finished. Still shivering.
Ohboyohboyohboy 🤗
