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Omdg! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I was thinking about this chapter as I go through my day. TWI has become my life. I see the atrocity of targeting fraerlings and want to help. Hope someone will help them. And then I think of current events and I could not care less about Ukraine. Where is the difference? I want to protect the fraerlings but think we should mind our own business about Ukraine. I can't help but feel like Relc; a veteran who understands warfare but not war.

Erin withdrawals are real.....

For the month tho?

Yeah you really cant read the black on black text on the phone which is my primary reading device for this - maybe consider not doing that in the future 😛

Amazing chapter. Just awestruck at what you accomplish as a writer. The sheer volume, yet at quality. And how much is conveyed despite a very simple style with little description. What a brilliant world. I can't wait to read more. Actually, I'll probably start reading from the start again soon. lol

Hold on to your butts

I began reading (early pandemic) because I thought it would be about someone getting trapped in a cursed inn that wandered a few towns away overnight, like Baba Yaga's hut. Each day new clientele; *they* can leave, but the cursed innkeeper? Never. I remain disappointed that this is not the story I got, but the teleportation door made me hopeful that it would someday evolve into something more. This chapter is especially exciting to me because it features the Titan's invention: towers that can be moved. It suggests another way the story can live up to its title: a mobile fortress animated by Fraerling magic to shelter their refugees and provide a new home.

Mockery jones. Cool name. Did you write this story? Did you teach yourself to talk to people like that? Take your own advice.

Blacked out text is a trick that is clever once. Knock it off.

Is Patreon getting a chapter this Saturday or on the 9th?

Enjoying the story, like what you are doing. Been reading for about 6 months after listing to the your audio book, and am now caught up to with your latest post. Hopefully more of your Audio Books are on there way, my apprentice in the reading of the story has completed the 1st of 5 that you currently have out, but I don't know if she will go to a text version. Any word on upcoming releases of future Audio Books?

For those having issues with black text, in Firefox and in Samsung Internet (YUCK) there's an option to make the page just text. (Book icon). That's what I generally use.

Throughout this chapter I experienced my heart pounding, gasps, moments of hilarity, chills down my spine, triumph, short stuttering breaths ... you are a gifted writer, and I thank you for your hard work in bringing the riveting stories of this vibrant world that you've created to us.

I read purely on my mobile, as I'm sure many others do. Nor am I willing to transfer to my laptop just to read those sections. I would personally suggest you go back and tweak her 'text' so it's readable by all. Though you don't have to listen to me. My comment could be seen as self serving.

I get the choice to hide Foliana's text that way since she's a rogue and all, but dead gods is it obnoxious when there is so much of it. Especially painful on mobile. If you choose to do such large chunks of stealth writing in future chapters I hope you just hide it in spoiler tags or do what you did with the mice chapters. Otherwise, great chapter! Interested to see what becomes of Luan/his class

Foliana is hilarious, her traps are fantastic! Had to comment before I continue the chapter.

Part of the story from were army reaches 5 miles out don't show up its all black letters

Wowwww, you really jumped the shark here. I can't believe you've done this.

thankie 8)