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It's here! The chapter you've all be waiting for! (23,700 Words)
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I really loved this chapter. I hope we get another chapter about them. Really great group to add to the story that isn't just fighters.
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Great chapter
This was a good chapter. How you make a chapter about actors this fun I will never know. Great job.
Good call before the storm chapter.
I can't wait for the Players to meet the Witches. That said, I find it weird that Erin can't think of anything for the players that's female-centered. Maybe not in major, classical plays that wouldn't be possible, but if we're converting films to stage, then she should have a fair amount to pull on. Wicked and Mulan just off the top of my head.
Both Mulan and Wicked have romance as a major part of the plot for the main character though.
Ever the amazing work Aba.
Keep up the good work!
I adored this chapter so much. Its chapters like this that make me wish Pirateaba was two or three people because I would gladly read a series just on this cast alone.
and here I was expecting Persua !
In your formatting you could drop “the town” because it’s implied at that point. Another way to arrange it would be, “Sovvex was a town of nearly forty thousand in total.”
"The town of Sovvex was nearly forty thousand in total" should probably be "The population of the town of Sovvex was nearly forty thousand in total"