Interlude - Foliana
This was a hard side story! Another chapter made of HUBRIS. On my part! But it's done! (16,000 Words)
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Hm I actually really liked how yo did this chapter. I don't believe that the secret links were there to be sneaky on your part, since everyone who finds it can just reveal them to others. Rather I think you included them because they reveal the hidden agenda, they tell a completely different story than that which comprises the majority of the chapter.
Given Pirate referred to them directly in the comments I see nothing hidden about it at all. Just a new way of writing a story - made me read the chapter twice with two different views. A pity it cannot be shown the same way in book form. :-)
Ugghhhh you are the worst in the absolutely best way. I love the hidden stuff, going back and banging my head against the wall. Her skills are wicked. The best part is. She's so everywhere with her actions that first glance you can't tell if she's doing something just cause she wants or a more specific purpose.
Can I request a poll specifically on whether people like the hidden content?
I get that you’re being creative with the rogue, and I enjoyed the content you put in there, but I come here to relax, not to try to ferret out buried content. If others really like it, then whatever, I guess. But I work 12 hour days, and I come here to *enjoy* and *read*. Not to wonder if I’ve had the wool pulled over my eyes. I can honestly say this (and last time) is the only time I’ve felt sour about reading your work.
Thanks!
dont forget to vote for the wanderin inn. http://topwebfiction.com/vote.php?for=the-wandering-inn
Please excuse me in advance.... Holy fucking shit Foliana is so cool. that is all.
Thank you!
I only found 2 secrets. I think that is all of them. Unless the secrets had secrets ...
A great chapter! One with definitely no secrets in it for sure! I guess it says something about how consistent you are that for a while I thought that the joke for this chapter was that you weren’t going to post a link to it.
What were they?