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I wonder if Nehevia might tell/teach Toren about Erin about how to learn to forgive or at least understand Erin’s perspective.

Very Good chapter! I had been hoping for a follow up on Toren.

Nice

Now that he is with Nerhavia, he will be headed to Chandar and will meet up with his creator and try to kill him only to get accepted into the Horns.

Loved it. Tried to make it last, but oh well. More Toren please. More with Doren, Toren, Mav and Gothica would be cool. The story sort of reminded my of when Erin was just getting started. It would probably work as a spin off.

Great chapter! You’ve done two chapters in a row that take a side character I’d forgotten about, and made me want to see them again. Doren even more so than Nailren! I loved seeing Toren happy. Really excited to see how his actions at Cormeng’s affect the world. More [Goths], Healing Slime Chess, AND a global news system?

Gothica the [Goth] evangelist! I love it. Want to see more Midnight Tailor and where that can go

Great chapter. Loved the Cormeng's stuff especially. ...still sad for another whole month with no Erin =_=

Another Wonderful chapter Paba. I didn't really want a toren chapter, same as the silver swords but you did it again. I legit cried for toren. And I can't wait for part 2 for both Silver Swords and Toren. And I genuinely love the little moments like with Normen, how he was nervous or how absurd the "challenge" was to everyone but the solstice knights. Even terandrian knights calling in is hilarious. And I really feel for toren. The one person who can help him is trapped in another continent and is 6 inches tall. Toren x Erin conversation is long overdue

SHORT!? This is going in the book of grudges!

cultivator, cultivator, cultivator! ah well maybe drath'll get anothre chance later. they are the edge of the world or something. I wonder if you could stand neraby and toss stuff off the world, or if everything just falls/get's sucked in

Damn, I was hoping the Toren chapter would be Pirate's first 100k word chapter.

We could have had Drath dang it

I WANTED DRATH THIS IS DRATH ERASURE (i will enjoy it anyways cause ur writing is epic)

Great chapter and the end is great good to see her back

It was a great chapter

The hardest part of these chapters is always imagining what else we could have gotten with the other chapters. That said, I loved this chapter. So... Eh.

I would buy a t-shirt that states Toren is Innocent.

Love the return to the pawn shop.

Welche to the bonezone

TOREN MY BELOVED

Thank you