Progress 06.03.2026
Hello all!
Rendering is in... surprisingly decent shape. I even think that I’m where I should be. And thus I’m more or less happy about that.
Writing? It’s getting there. The rhythm of writing has been off for a couple of weeks for some reason. It’s ongoing and I’m not worried about it; it’s just off, you know? But eh it’s on update 9 and all that, so yeah. Just yelling at the cloud I suppose due to irritation of my own making of sorts.
Detectives Cross, Graves, and Randall. When I introduced Shannon (aka Detective Randall) I wasn’t really thinking of making this scene, then later on when I was writing update five or six it just clicked that this might actually be more important to show than just gloss over as an event that happened in the background. This and paired with the update four "hidden" image, gives some... backstory. The problem with these interludes, if you will, is that they can be too spoiler-heavy if you aren’t careful. Now I’m glad that I introduced the hidden images in ToaM, they sort of allow me to show a portion of the story that isn’t necessarily important, but something that is nice to know. Or maybe I’m just thinking too deeply. Right, a short break then finishing the scene and some writing. You all have a great weekend!
Comments (6)
Thank You Tal <3<3 :)))
Great to see the coalescence building. Nice to see Graves who used to threaten the head of te house of Sapphire Flame with handcuffs and a ride to the station. Is poor Shannon going to lose her daughter to the House? Lori be "big sister" to "half-pint" Will two grad students have to slog through the terrors of Marine Recon Training? So many questions from just two scenes.... Of course the answers now would be spoilers... FABULOUS JOB of fabulation-tense
Well... Graves (Miranda Graves to be exact) was doing her job back then... As for Lori? Well, no, her last name is Williams (it's in the codex), while Sabrina is Bryson. So that isn't exactly a spoiler, Lori's parents will be named at some point I think, hazy on the details right now. Well, more like name dropped, but point. The rest? Remains to be seen I suppose, eventually.
Awesome render. Thank You for the update.
Can't wait to see where this goes. ^^ Also, T, that scene with everyone's favourite little Sorcerer in the last update? Chef's kiss! 🥰
Thank you ✌️