On WICKED THINGS/CIRCUS WINDOWS process post
I hope you are enjoying (or if you are a $3/month patron, have enjoyed) Circus Windows. In this post I will take you through the thinking behind it, the background to it, and some of my sketches for it.
After Wicked Things was cancelled, I was in a bit of a bind. I say "cancelled", let's just say, if it had been more successful, there would have been more than six issues. That's life. We can lay the blame at the foot of the pandemic, the punishing direct market conditions for indie series, or me for writing a series set around law enforcement in the year of "defund the police". In the end, it was the wrong series at the wrong time. I can't blame anyone else who worked on it - their work was, as even untrained eyes will tell you, top-drawer.
In my (weak) defence, if I had known it was only getting six issues when I was writing it, I wouldn't have written it anything like I did. It was designed as a procedural, like a US TV show, to run and run, and be fun. My model was The Mentalist. I had 16 more issues of plots ready to go, which now seems ludicrously over-confident. I stretched out, when I should have made myself small. I think they were good comics, though, I'm proud of them.
It does take me a while to work out how to make something work properly and I don't think I can do that on company time in the current climate.
But in the wake of this snack-sized failure, one thing did not waver, my fondness for Charlotte Grote, who I think is my best character. I snarled her up in a bad-tempered series crammed with plot intrigue, and served her poorly. Lottie needs a stage on which to showboat and she seldom got one in Wicked Things. Circus Windows is my attempt to make amends for that. She starts off diminished, and ends puffed up back to her original size.
Wicked Things wasn't easy to write, and Charlotte had always been easy and fun to write before, which should have been a clue that I was pushing in the wrong direction. I can usually hear her contrarian voice in my head, but I lost it in that set-up and had to fight to find it. The good news was, as soon as I started writing Circus Windows, it switched straight back on.
Everything started with pencil and paper. Drawing the characters helps me get in touch with them.
[There was one more page of notes but it spoils the end so I'll save it for a couple of weeks.]
I just scrawled it out over the course of a day. The story doesn't have many moving parts, it's a two-hander with Mildred and Lottie getting to know one another again. The "case" is thin because Mildred just came up with it off the top of her head - it only becomes a thing because Lottie pokes it.
I tidied those notes up, pacing it out to make two 22-page "issues" - room for action and plot as well as lots of character stuff. I break my notes down neatly, page-by-page - this is as important a stage as scripting, as I can juggle things much more easily. My breakdown for pt1 is attached at the end as a PDF.
When I'm writing for myself, I don't type, I just write and draw the comic out in my notebook, paying attention to double-page spreads, because maybe someone will want to print this one day.
As you can see, I have to be fairly nippy about drawing these, as certain things increasingly resemble hieroglyphs as time goes on and I lose my ability to divine what on earth I was on about.
Circus Windows represents , in a sense, a return to core principles. I didn't want to make a new comic set in Tackleford, but I had no option but to send Lottie back to the safety of home - for good or ill. I didn't want to make a new Bad Machinery comic, but she needs a foil, and Mildred came with the least historical baggage.
But the long and short of it was that it's been a shitty year and it has been nice to spend the last few months of it at the drawing board with a friend.
There's more Charlotte in "Author Unknown", her Steeple crossover, but I'll talk more about that soon. I think they're some of my best ever comics, I'm excited for you to see them.
Thanks for reading!
Comments (21)
Reading this was vey insightful into the writer's process. And Lottie is truly a great character.
What a magical post. Thank you!
Thanks for the peek behind the curtain, John - from the outside perspective, it’s always hard to tell what’s going on with various delayed or canceled comic series. Circus Windows has been a hoot and I’m looking forward to the grand finale.
Add me to the list of folks who thought Wicked Things was great and are saddened that there won't be more of them. But as long as Lottie (et al.) lives on in one form or another, there is still some joy to be found in Mudville. Thanks for everything you do!
Really wonderful insights into your creation and creative process! I love Lottie, even as a mini-Grote she was an excellent thorn in the side of some of the older characters, and seems to be emerging into her own. I'm excited to see more of her in Steeple!
In my case Diamond bollixed the distribution, my LCS never got #3 despite several requests (although I do have variant covers of the other issues which they kept sending instead) and there don't seem to be any copies on the secondary market in the UK. Waiting on the trade in May to actually read it.
Sorry that WIcked Things didn't work out, but Circus Windows has been wonderful, so thank you for that, and for continuing to produce great work. And I still hope to see Lottie reunited with Claire some day. (As an aside - we know from Wicked Things why Lottie isn't at university, but shouldn't Mildred be? Does Circus Windows take place over a break or something? Did I miss the part about why Mildred is hanging around Tackleford in her amazing CERN jacket?)
Claire does show up briefly before the end! Mildred is on a gap year... this is addressed briefly too. Mildred's unconventional university career is a series all of its own... I have a lot of notes for that one!
John, your work gives me so much pleasure. It's a miracle to still have comics from you free on the Internet with such outstanding writing. Thank you for everything you do. Here's to a better year in 2021.
Sorry that Wicked Things didn't work out. I loved it, but I can see how it would be a tough sell in 2020. Still sad, though. (Is there any chance for a wrap-up, at least? I know it's a big ask.) But getting more Lottie is always something to look forward to; you're right, she probably is your best character, and when your competition is Shelley and Shauna (and Desmond, of course), that's impressive. :)
A wrap-up is not in my power - if the trade paperback does well, perhaps Max and I will get to the bottom of that particular mystery.
I've loved "Wicked Things"♡. I'm sorry to read it was not successful. Stay strong ♡. I like Lottie a lot ( sorry for the bad pun) and I love her and Mildred as a Dirty Pair of mysteries solver♡. Can't wait for the crossover with the awesome "Steeple" ♡♡♡.
I thought Wicked Things was a lot of fun and included it on my best of the year list for SOLRAD: https://solrad.co/solrads-the-best-comics-of-2020 Still, I'm glad you're working on something you think works better!
Cheers Andrew! I put everything I had into writing Wicked Things and I greatly appreciate you giving it a nod on your list.
It's all my fault, I was waiting for the trade. I'll go and buy the issues. Then you can say, "You see? It's selling!" and get it renewed.
Please wait for the trade if that's the format you want to buy!!!
I quite enjoyed Wicked Things, I think it could have found more of its footing if given a chance, but such is the way I suppose. Loving Circus Windows, I’ll agree that Lottie feels more herself - helps to have Mildred to bounce off of.
Wicked Things was great and while it's a bummer we won't get to see that story to fruition, glad we have more Charlotte on the way. Agree that she is your best character, which is saying something.
FWIW, I loved Wicked Things, but you're aren't wrong that it was a pretty rough year to be putting out a new comic book.
Ahh, what a bummer. It was one of the only things I subscribed to.I hope that your plots see the light of day someday.
Nothing is wasted, Brian.
