Progress 15 June 2025
This week Mortze wrote the script and created the final images for the fight scene he's been working on. I'm most of the way through the process of converting them to code, and the scene is definitely a banger. Next week, I assume he's going to start working on a new scene.
I put a lot of effort into the text short story I've been working on, but it's starting to feel bogged down. So I spent some time last night reflecting on what's wrong, and I realized that I'm telling the wrong story. The story I should be telling is with the same characters in the same setting and timeframe but has a different purpose. This will allow me to remove a lot of the bloat that has been weighing it down. Unfortunately, it'll also take out a few lines that I really like, but sometimes writers have to kill their darlings. I tell aspiring writers that, if you can tell a story with fewer words, you generally should. Time to follow my own advice...
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Edit: I wanted to make this week's weekly available to everyone, but it has nudity in it, so it can't be public here. If you're not a paid patron and want to see it, it's in the updates and announcements channel on our discord.
Comments (2)
Awesome, guys! Can't wait for this BANGER scene and this release to drop! Looking forward to reading this story, T! Thanks for the update, Tlaero! Stay safe, stay blessed, and in PERFECT health, everyone! Have an amazing and beautiful week! Also, Happy Father's Day to you both and to everyone, if you guys celebrate! I'll catch you all—ON THE NEXT ONE ✌🏻😉!!!
The earmark of a good writer is being able to see that in your own work. You are a GREAT writer Tlaero!
