Maidens of the Fall, Arc 5, Parasomnia, Chapter 1
Chapter glides from grey-green waves, to hop and slither along the rotten waterfront, wandering further from briny shores, lost among salt-streaked ruins.
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Epub version of the chapter is also attached!
Arc 5, Arc 5! Here we are at last, dear readers, far past the wall of sleep, tossing and turning in the grip of a nightmare. Several candidates presented themselves as contenders for the title of this arc, and the competition was close, but I'm quite pleased with the result. Octavia may be markedly less pleased, but then again, this was never going to be a good time for her, was it? She enjoyed herself much more in the previous chapter; now it's time for ... well, something different.
As for length, as usual, this arc is already proving unruly. I have 6 chapters planned (and I'm already elbow-deep into the second), but we'll see if that holds. Things might get expansive. As dreams so often tend to do.
In the meantime, I hope you all enjoy the chapter, and the opening of arc 5! It feels great to be getting even deeper into the real meat of the story at last, though we've still barely scratched the surface. Without further ado, back to magical girls on the moon (and elsewhere)!
Comments (10)
holy SHIT, what an INCREDIBLE chapter
Yaaaaaay! Thank you so much! Really glad you enjoyed this!
Does this imply Tissy is something other than a magical girl? (Was that mentioned before and I just forgot?)
It hasn't been addressed openly in the story yet, but so far Octavia is assuming Tissy is not a magical girl, yes; Tissy is not a human being, she's something from the Dreamlands, and whatever she is, her capabilities seem to be totally different to what magical girls are usually capable of. All we know so far is that she's an old friend of Nerys, and she looks like a human sea-slug.
And in comes Octavia with the steel chair! OOOOH, and the crowd goes wild. Zoogs are cheering in the stands and going crazy!
Now Octavia needs to climb the side of a cage and throw Willow off it. Magical girl wrestling!
Willow a clingy bitch. I hope she gets a good slap with a metal hand.
Hahahahaha. Yes! She is a clingy bitch. Octavia's ex, turning up uninvited, doing all sorts of horrible things. She's gonna get that metal fist eventually.
Gregory, what a true friend
He has indeed done nothing but be helpful for Octavia, first with her drinking problem, now with her ex. Gregory to the rescue!
