Natural Enemy Comments
If you had any thoughts on Arc 1 or Arc 2 of Natural Enemy, leave comments on the chapters that you liked or didn't like.
Not for vibes. Not for ego. For signal.
Your reactions tell me what’s landing, what’s dragging, and which threads are actually worth escalating. That feedback directly shapes how future arcs unfold. That means pacing, focus, character weight, all of it. This story isn’t written in a vacuum; it’s tuned in real time.
The more you comment, the clearer the signal. The clearer the signal, the sharper the next arc gets.
I'll be writing No-Life Kid for the next couple days.
Comments (3)
I like the premise, used to watch Infamous walk-throughs a tiny bit as a child but had no real info of the series, but with One Piece being my top 3 pieces of media i was pretty sold on it. Ironically so, i didn't touch this story for a week or 2 at first out of disinterest for the Infamous aspect but i def am interested in Infamous as a whole now due to conduits and their seemingly suppressed existence.
Looking forward for more of no life kid.
I like the premise I just don't jive with it one piece isnt my favorite thing in the world tbh thats prob most of the reason