WAR
How are you guys liking war so far? I have a few more chapters outlined out ready to go and then I’ll switch to nerd in the north for like 10 chapters.
And then the next 10 chapters of massive disaster.
I just wanna get your opinion on how you like the story so far
Let me know. Like in comment.
Comments (14)
I'm happy with it, glad you decided to roll out some chapters for it.
Love the story, but I'm somewhat worried for your health and the risk of creative burnout.
I love it keep updating
Yep, this is one of the good ones. I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of trouble the perks will be getting him out of.. and into.
I'm really digging Kenny's voice in this fic and the absolute mess he started out in. Look forward to seeing how he'll progress though I gotta say I'm always a fan of initial street level celestial fics.
Love it.
Really enjoying it. Getting properly invested now. And I would have also fallen for the goth vampire lol
She’s actually based on a girl I knew a few years ago.
I like it. Talked about the nexus and it’s variety before so I’ll just skip that. Only thing I’m sus on for it is summoning people cause it feels like that could get weird pretty quickly. The magus friend was handled well but that was a specific circumstance. The MC is interesting enough, family situation is rough, terrible hometown, etc. Not much interaction with the wider DC world but it’s the opening arc and he just got his powers so that’s to be expected. Vampires seem like a good first opponent for him to deal with and build both himself and his name up. Pretty interested in seeing how he approaches his training without a dedicated Naruto/ninja sensei since the perk only gave him basic/beginner level knowledge, Gotta watch out for eye thief’s too, a lot of people would want those eyes depending on how they work without chakra.
I’ve already pre-rolled for a bit and there’s no other characters, but if I can’t establish them in universe, I’m probably gonna reroll. I don’t want it to just derail the whole story by just dropping somebody random.
I like it, I like the powers he’s getting. I am concerned about the sharingan being over used. I say keep it as a back up just in case things go wrong. Like a secret weapon. Like…have him eventually in time get used to the power since it can drain your chakra reserves. But with enough time he can be like itachi and have it almost indefinitely. but maybe have them interact with heroes? Or like Nightwing or the Bat? Do some heroes know about the hunters?? Considering this DCAMU him meeting these guys is only amount of time.
Nightwing will show up. No, heroes do not know about the hunters. At least not like the Meta heroes.
I like it but the small skips fit this story less then your other ones. IE i mean the skips in time between chapters.
Each chapter follows right after the other. There haven’t really been time skip so much as it’s like the next day or a few hours later. But I’d like to understand more what you mean.