You Are Into Mouse Trap YouTube
Many of you have already seen this, but I'm finally releasing it to YouTube, so it's time for it to be on Patreon again. Sorry it was down for so long!
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I moved into a 200 year old farm house 7 years ago fresh out of high school, and it was absolutely infested with mice, to which I'm allergic. I would try to trap and kill them, but when I saw one old or injured and dragging itself around, I'd give it a cheerio. Didn't really make any sense. Eventually I went to pour myself some olive oil and realized not one but two mice had climbed into the top, gotten stuck and drowned. Had to wonder how the second mouse felt about climbing in. I put the bottle outside and it sat there for a year or so until it just sort of melted into the dead grass and dirt. I don't know why I, but I didn't want to get rid of it. Anyway, wonderful video. Appreciate you.
really astonishing flickers in some ways between ekphrastic and the completely, completely small . love the subterranean little shifts in perspective and speakerhood ur word choice and structure is so economic and minimal that when it slips or deviates or expands it feels so exciting like a knife was revealed in the trench coat pocket or something. love ur stuff
This comment seems written by CJ the X - and that's a compliment
A stunner of a video, in writing and illustration - this was a real great for both you and Lily
Very thought provoking! Can't believe I never saw this one. Listened to it while walking the dog; I'm still walking the dog! Inevitably I have to go home to go to sleep next to my gf. She's been watching beaver dam removal videos. Perhaps I'll start watching those by myself too...
omg I was desperately searching for this weeks ago to show my wife. yay!!!
Ohhhhh yeahhh baby this was phenomenal!!! Currently wondering if i should send it to my wife or if it's too uncanny in its accuracy.
I am into nothing, do you hear me 'Big' Joe? NOTHING
Seriously, I do like this one a lot. The second person in fiction often makes me think of reading Choose Your Own Adventure novels as a kid. Sometimes I think: wouldn't it be great if there were modern Choose Your Own Adventure books for adults - imagine one with subject matter like this story.
My favorite of yours!
Yoooo hell yeah! This video fucked me up when I saw it and I was so sad it was gone. Your short story writing is very good, and it scratches a very specific itch for me. Can't wait to see more
Seconded. More fiction writing on the channel would make me a happy customer.