HEART OF IRON Ch. 34
Well that was dramatic.
(2nd-act "Lowest Points" and 3rd act climaxes are really tough to get on the first draft. For reference, it was the most re-written part of Citadel.)
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I could be completely wrong and I know that this isn't really a chapter in the completed book as it's not been published yet as there are more steps to go through before it does get published. So asking more out of curiosity more than anything. JC's former gang in this chapter (34) at least in part of it is named as the Razors. Like I said I could be wrong but pretty sure they were named as the Reapers in a previous chapter. Did the name change or am I thinking of another gang that was mentioned previously when I say the Reapers
Am I misreading something there or did Mark Austen's name change to Anthony a few lines later? Or are those two different people? Maybe it's just that I'm not a native English speaker...
Such a good discussion! And yeah dramatic but fits very well! I havent read much the last weeks until the last few days where ive been catching up and then now i have to wait for more ahhhhhh!!! Love your writing!
Intense! As someone else pointed out, this is a tough, necessary discussion to have. Here's where character growth for these three begins.
Yeah… that’s a good chapter. Poor jc I just wanna hug them
Short but powerful! Good chapter!!
Book JC may be tougher than TT JC. And treating Nicole like she's being an asshole when she is being one, that's seriously awesome
Ooof!!! This hit hard and *right*!!! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Dramatic, yes -- but necessary. It explains a great deal about each character's mindset, and sets the stage for the redemption arc. Well done!
Yeah and what the fuck
So this has nothing to do with this chapter but it's butt gang so in chapter 13 I'm trying to figure out if you just missed a word or it's a continuity or but a diamond refers to the king of IVAE As grandfather have everyone act like her and Bob aren't related