HEART OF IRON Ch. 24
We're in the "I'm gonna be completely rewriting the entire back half of this book anyway, might as well have some fun with it" zone of writing.
When I do rewrite it, I'm likely going to self-publish it, and will require crowdfunding to make that happen (at least, to make it happen in a way that results in a high-quality item). That'll probably happen around February or March, so keep your eyes peeled for that.
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Cyrus's mom sounds quite pretty, to be honest.
I honestly haven't made it very far because of work, so I'll catch up over my weekend and join in when I can! 🥰 It seems like a lot of people already adore it however as is!
"Va hinal?" translates to "my son?" or is it his name?
Basically "my child."
This is a great chapter for the book that will be set in the Fae realm, that reveal at the end is great. And it's nice to see Nicole's magic in effect.
Sorry to disagree, but this chapter is ALREADY Perfect!
Oh, DAMN what an ending!!!
If this doesn't make it in the rewrite since you mentioned that it will probably be 99% in the human realm, you have one hell of a chapter for Heart of Silver!
Well DUH! Of course he was worried how his mother would receive him! Heck, just relatives at holidays can be rough. (I may be projecting a little)
Also excellllllent cliff hanger. You’re evil. Well done.
Yeah that’s what I was suspecting, love it…just the right level of foreshadowing to go ‘I’m pretty sure it’s this but I can’t be positive…’
One of them needs to bring up that Cyrus can live off the land... ...unless it's funnier to have them realize that when they get back...
Ooo I had speculated this might be it! But damn! The delivery on that reveal! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Love this! I hope some version of it survives the rewrite. And I'll happily contribute to the crowdfund when we get there. :)
Gods damn that last line! you're an artist of the pen. My heart cries for the next chapter. When oh when oh when?
Awww. =) I get a sense of JC looking out for everyone here and I love it.
Oh, chit. That's all I can say, Oh CHIT!!!! That last line!!!
Right? Like, what a way to make us wait!