HEART OF IRON Ch. 12
An info-dump chapter! Oh, goodie!
I try to avoid doing exposition like this, but didn't see another way for the first draft. Cyrus also becomes something of an info-dumper, both in this chapter and down the line, which I'm not too keen on. I'll stick to it for this first draft, but for revisions, I'm likely to replace that with snippets of other stories. You know how Dracula is a collection of letters, telegrams, journals, and newspaper clippings that all work together to tell the story? I think something similar might be interesting; stories that JC heard during their time in jail, newspapers from the past, modern-day fairy tales that parents in this world would tell their children, etc.
Comments (9)
Oh, wow! This is a DEFINITE curveball from the TT story!
Cyrus does info dumping so well though. On an unrelated note, Citadel is amazing so far
Yay! The story continues! There are a couple of things I might structure differently, but this chapter holds together well. I look forward to the trip to the Fae lands.
Thanks for the Lore! I needed this after my day. And the coin-sith pricked up my little Scottish ears (plural of cu-sith, right?), such a cool detail! Very excited for more, and hope you've enjoyed your weekend away!
Absolutely love this lore dump
Great, as always! Somehow I've never connected JC's name with the religion lol
I loved it! It felt pretty natural with the storyline! JC was asking about stuff and getting answers! Thanks for making Monday better!
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New chapter new chapter new chapter!!! I may have binged ALL of this so far AND the accidental kidnapping story yesterday. So excited to see more! And yessss, I called it on why Nicole wears the gloves. Very interesting world building! I’m really enjoying this and can’t wait to see what comes next!