HEART OF IRON Ch. 2
Good morning, lovelies!
If you've followed the TikTok series for a while--or binged the whole thing--you'll recall that JC's very first episode involved them striking a deal with Bob (re: Violet) to legally change their name. This is heavily based on that.
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I cried omg. But I do find it a *little* funny that JC used to literally be a Dick. Overall, this chapter is amazing, and I haven't even got to chapter three. I love the in-depth descriptions(expect fan art when I get a new digital pen) And I think I am falling in love with Bob, respectfully. I wish my family would be as accepting of my chosen name(Auryn, means golden light) but no, Patience is apparently a part of my identity.
Auryn is such a pretty name! Good choice.
Omg I'm in love u r amazing and this is the best 2 dollars I have ever spent.
It's so fucking adorable, I love it already!!
I'm tearing up over the grandma. I'm such a softy
This chapter is so heart warming 🥰 having recently binged "Accidentally kidnapped" I'm very nervous about the future of these darlings
I've read this chapter may be 3 times, and I still can't get over the fact that he calls her the purple pixie devil.
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I love the additional details we are getting on some very beloved characters! Luckily, here in the PNW, changing name and sex are pretty easy. My daughter-by-choice changed hers with the state, and as soon as she did, was allowed to change her name with the Military. THAT was the biggest shock. Just wish they'd let her transition like they said she could over a year ago. 😢
The TikTok version of this scene was remarkable, but this prose version? AWESOME!!!!!
Definitely binged through it last night
The only problem with coming into a story currently being written is the WAITING!!!! I am adoring your writing, and I know the next chapter will be here eventually, so I shall be (im)patient. LOL
Have binged & had a rebinge of content since joining Patreon. Great follow on from Accidental Kidnapping. I’m loving this.
I LOVE THIS!!!
Do you want typos to be reported? "Driver’s ed had been too expensive, TO say nothing of a car."
At the moment, I'm not looking to fix any typos. With first draft revisions, the edits are so broad (things like "should this chapter exist, do I need to combine these two characters into one, maybe I should rewrite the whole ending) that typos and grammar mistakes aren't even on the radar.
Loving it so far!
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Hi, new here after tripping over you on TT, then bingeing all of CFL on YT. I ended this chapter with a big smile and an "awwe"
Ma’am I absolutely adore your work, and this was no different
Fun fact: Maria is also a Polish name! It’s fairly popular
I have been reading this out loud to my kiddo. She cried and then did as much of a happy dance as she could while sitting down.
I full on squeaked when I saw their full name! And the story behind it had me tearing up! I can honestly say I've never had so many feelings about my own first name in such a short space of time! Congratulations! I can see this book is gonna have me an absolute wreck in the best way possible! Can't wait for more!
Love it. Really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to the next.
AHHHHH! I love this series so much! I cannot WAIT for chapter 3!
My non-binary child and I are in discussions about the timing of changing their name. It is a difficult process in Missouri when they’re a minor. I wish we had a Bob to help.
I probably would have cried too if my name changed without any issues like that. That's a great deal, honestly. I'd have taken it too.
I really am loving this so much!
That was beautiful, I teared up as I read about the ID card. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
The way you write I feel like I can see it play out like a movie. And the fact that we have the TikToks I can see how the characters would interact during this interaction between Bob and JC. I can’t wait for more chapters
Awh, my heart. I wish I had a magical fairy to give get rid of my dead name 🥲. Anyway; amazing! Can't wait to read more.
This is such an awesome feel-good chapter
Crying happy tears over a chapter is a great way to start the day.
