HEART OF IRON - Prologue
Good morning, lovelies! Today's the day! We are starting the CaFae Latte book!
You'll find the prologue attached to the bottom of this post, but I want to clarify some things before you begin reading:
This is a rough draft. I'm polishing it up for obvious errors and typos, but it's not a final product. There might be some continuity errors or character arcs that fall flat. If you've read my work Citadel, that took several revisions and rewrites before it reached bookshelf quality. Thus, expect this version of Heart of Iron to be like upper-level fanfiction, at least until I self-edit within an inch of its life.
On a related note, please share your feedback. I don't need to know of any typo or grammar mistakes (unless you spot one that I regularly commit, like if I'm using "cannon" instead of "canon"). But if there's a bit of worldbuilding that doesn't make sense or something needs clarification, let me know! I have a document set aside for revision notes, and that's where I'll put your feedback.
This book is not done. I currently have eleven chapters drafted, including the prologue and chapter one. I've been cranking out about 2-3 per week on days I do not work on TikTok scripts. (On those days, if I have spare time and want to write, I focus on the Accidentally Kidnapped/Lord of Starlight rewrite. This way, I don't burn out on this project early.)
While I've got a nice buffer, it's very possible for me to fall behind, in which case, you might be going without a Heart of Iron chapter for a little while. Still, I will endeavor to give you two chapters a week, one on Monday and one on Friday.
Heart of Iron is a different story from CaFae Latte - THERE ARE DIFFERENCES.
Not big ones. It's the same characters and setting, and you'll see a lot of overlap. Think Marvel Comics vs Marvel Cinematic Universe. I'm taking the original ingredients of the CaFae Latte series and mixing them up in a different way. A way that's slightly darker, exploring a bit of Bob's bloody backstory as well as JC's, as well as some ramifications of having a bunch of fae creatures suddenly running around human society. (Especially the seedy underbelly of society where JC spent most of their life.)
Basically, while the TikTok series is primarily fluff and hurt/comfort, the book is going to have a lot more angst and tension (but still hurt/comfort and a little bit of fluff. Approximately the same levels of sass, too.)
This is why the prologue is free, so you can get a taste. Don't like it, don't read it.
Many of you have asked, will this book get published? Eventually, yes. That's the plan. Once I revise and rewrite the draft I'm letting you read, I'll have my literary agents find a home for it. From there, it depends on who buys which rights: some publishers may want only audio or paper rights, some may want to turn it into a graphic novel or video game, some may want everything. It's completely up in the air, and not likely to be a concern until at least 2024, probably later.
All that said, enjoy the book!
When you're finished with the prologue, here's Chapter One.
Comments (19)
I just read this chapter. OMG!! I can't wait till I order the book. I'm already HOOKED!!!! I was already from watching your videos, but now even more so!!
The sisters named Blue and Green seem like afterthoughts at the moment. Perhaps slightly less mundane names, or maybe there's more character development I haven't gotten to yet explaining them having such basic color names?
I have suggestions, since most people say I am good at names! Blue: Azure Indigo Woad (silly but its a form of blue dye) cornflower Green: Sage Aspen (Any tree with primarily green leaves) Fern Emerald Basically if you want, there's a whole world of cool natural, fae appropriate aliases for colours
Regarding Bob's (Violet's) hair color: Midnight Purple, perhaps? I saw it mentioned on Quora. It is a custom car paint color, so dark it looks black, but in certain light the purple shines through. "Violet" as a color just doesn't quite jive with "near black" in my head. Looking for something more descriptive.
I'm only just getting started -- was in a no Internet zone for a while. The description of fae architecture is that it is not made from lumber, like humans do, but grown over time. The impression I get is that the structures are still alive while being lived in. This I am puzzled by one statement: "The trees had been grown, CUT (caps mine), curved, and molded...." How cut and why, please? It seems contradictory.
I really enjoy your descriptions and the balance between them and your dialogue. It really puts me in the scene. It's also really fun to see the actual description of Violet/Bob plus the colors/patterns of the other fae instead of them all being basically white humans with maybe pointy ears or added height.
OMG it is amazing. I do have a question though. What did the Copper prince mean by "kinslayers"? I think it may need some clarification. I love Bob's attitude and her way of taking responsibility.
"Kin" = family/blood relation, so a kinslayer is someone who kills a family member
I appreciate Violet's no effs given and no shit taken attitude. Loving that. Also you don't see enough of the Fae that are not pale skinned and shinny.
Holy Mother of God!! I love this so much! You're such a good writer I look up to you. This is such a good story so far!
The prologue drew me in to this world right away and left me wanting more. It's going to be torture waiting for new chapters. :)
OMG!! The "Good luck". The sass! Love it! Also gotta give you props for the fae "growing" their homes. It always made so much more sense to me that they would manipulate the growth if trees than carve into them or cut them down.
Could I request that you attach a prefix to your files indicating which goes to which series? I store all my PDFs in one folder.
You can always rename them once you've downloaded them! That's what I do. :)
This is absolutely brilliant! Can't wait to read more!
Is there any particular reason why she calls the king “your grace”? It’s typically how you address dukes and duchesses. Or am i just reading into it too much
Yes, the reason is I'm an ignorant American with little idea of how real-life royalty actually works. 🤣
I love this! It was so detailed, I could picture every scene 😄 I love that Violet (Bob) has always been fiesty!
Ooh I am looking forward to this.
