July 21, 2023
ACCIDENTALLY KIDNAPPED Ch. 41
Oh, look, another paragraph that would work much better with proper set-up and foreshadowing! Gotta love the chaos of first drafts.
(As long as it's better than Game of Thrones season 8, I can live with it.)
Comments (4)
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Bryce Maryott · July 21, 2023
Well, that's not going according to plan. Well, not the PRINCESS'S plan!
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Eleanor Hindley · July 21, 2023
This cliffhanger is rude.
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Jim MacLeod · July 21, 2023
I think it works really well as is. It's very fitting with the court of Daylight.
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David Morris · July 21, 2023
Oh my