ACCIDENTALLY KIDNAPPED - Ch. 18
Good evening, lovelies!
(I knew there was something I was forgetting to do today. Thank goodness for to-do lists!)
In today's chapter, we have the Midnight Invasion and Brea's initial response to it. We also get a surprise traitor. :)
Comments (8)
I don't know why, but the typo on page 7 of "Bread face-palmed" instead of "Brea face-palmed" made me laugh so hard that I had to stop reading for almost 5 minutes to compose myself. The mental image of bread face-palming was just too much for me, it seems!
Crying and screaming, I’m absolutely hooked!!! For a moment when I read surprise traitor, I thought maybe you’d really kill me with turning Sir Enico. While osmund was the obvious choice, I’m grateful it wasn’t someone I cared about 😂 In love with your work so far and I can’t wait to read more!!! Best of luck to you with all of your many literary endeavors!
I am devasted by the cliffhanger and am so excited to read more.
So I saw this drop and then decided I would treat myself to reading after a job interview... It's time to read!!!!
I hope your interview went well!
I don't know how much of a surprise it is that Osmund is the traitor. Well placed foreshadowing of a douchy personality sound more correct.
Yeah, this is another thing that'll need to be revised, especially in Act 1. I'll have to create an actual friendship between him and Janoz before driving this particular wedge between them.
It is hard to wait for each chapter but it's worth the wait.