HEART OF SILVER: Excerpt 33
Playing around with formatting and POV here. Lemme know what you think!
Comments (6)
I like the formatting. Works really well.
i really like the formating, curious to see if you keep it simple or make it a really detailed thing. personally id like to see what a para court room case looks like, and see how cyrus acts in court.
Hadn't even considered that para court might be its own separate thing. Awesome idea!
I really like how you are setting this up. The transcript formatting really worked for this!
Probably derived from actual courtroom transcripts, which kudos to Chris for that bit of legwork. However, I'm genuinely curious if these "transcripts" could be part of a newspaper article wherein the author can interject with their own assessments, fact-checking, and additional research, such as the number of unsolved cold cases involving an indigenous or other marginalized person.
I really like this! It's very interesting to have the time jump and to show what happened in this format.