Dark Born: Bk. I - Ch. 15 | Secrets Revealed |
Here’s chapter 15
Some questions are finally answered…
Enjoy!
Comments (2)
I'm not sure if you check the comments on Lit, but I did want to say I really loved this chapter! My dude is finally exploring what's going on with himself and accepting that he really doesn't have control of other people's feelings. Honestly his thoughtfulness and patience to take time and understand everything going on is amazing. It really makes his character interesting. Also, in the scene where Adam asks Elsa if she's going to join him for lunch, did you mean to say that Katryn being present was holding Elsa back? "...but he was certain that Elsa being present was what was holding her back."
I do read the comments on Lit, but responding to them is a challenge. You’re right about Katryn’s presence holding Elsa back, I tend to miss small details like since I do all the editing myself. But I’m hoping I can get an editor soon and sort that out. I’m really glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thank you for your support.