Dark Born: Bk. I - Ch. 14 | Warm Embrace |
Here’s chapter 14!
Only one chapter this week again. The holiday chaos is starting to get in the way. I’m hoping things settle down soon.
Enjoy!
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Same comment as before, gone for over 2 days: - Went out 1st day / afternoon to investigate and doesn't come back - Elsa spent the whole night awake looking for him - Next morning, 2nd day, Elliot finds her and they begin looking together - Warehouse events happen during that second day - Recovering over night, again Elsa doesn't sleep staying by his side - Wakes up, 3rd day, meeting, visit, back to Inn - 2+ days. Hope notes like this are helpful. I am genuinely enjoying the story but timing and world building stuff like just tend to take me out of it.
Thank you for pointing this out. Unfortunately, I do editing myself, so it’s easy to miss small inconsistencies like this. I hope I can find an editor soon and leave it to them, then I can just focus on the actual writing. Again, thank you for pointing it out.