January 21, 2025

V 0.4 Status Report 3.

Hey again...

The addition of Mother's voice to her dialogues in this version is complete. 66 audio files. I still have a few left with audio for some short dialogues from the Guards, but there are so few that I can’t even remember how many. Four or six, maybe...
The "light" version of the unknown girl’s death is absolutely finished... I’ve also made some progress on the sex scene with 16 new images rendered and added to the code, along with the corresponding dialogue, which adds up to around 400 words.


I noticed there might have been a small issue I never caught before. With the first large image of Asami, one of the two that pans her figure from bottom to top... Well, both had the same name definition. If there was any possible problem, it’s definitely fixed now.
I also redid the first two images of Josephine (the albino girl), and I still have two more from a later scene to work on...

At first, I did it out of curiosity. I wanted to see if ChatGPT could do proofreading, remodeling my English dialogues to make them sound more natural. So, I gave it some parameters and tested it with my first texts from the Epilogue, since that’s where I figured the oddest stuff might show up... In the end, I got carried away, and I’m now relatively close to finishing the dialogue revision for the Epilogue. I’m currently at the start of the meeting between Jordan’s group and MC... But that’s where I’ll stop, because going over everything else after the Epilogue would be too much. That’ll be for another update...

But yeah... The Epilogue will now have tons of dialogue improvements. That doesn’t include Mother’s or the Guards’ dialogues, since those are meant to sound "unnatural".

I still have 2 and a half more animations to render, plus the short final scene.

Tonight, I plan to properly play through all the new stuff, and I’ll let you know on Thursday how much extra gameplay time we’ve got.

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Comments (2)

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Banisher · January 22, 2025

Thanks a million for the insights! After reading this, I will surely restart playing from the beginning!

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AllNatural · January 22, 2025

Oh. My. Fucking. God... I just finished the text revision for the prologue. That last part was the worst. I’m dead... There’s no fun in reviewing over 2400 lines of code, checking dialogues, copying, pasting into ChatGPT, manually reviewing alternatives... then copying and pasting again to replace what’s already written... I’m not doing this again for a long time XD