Hypnotherapist Discussion
Let's talk about Hypnotherapist! At this point I think it is fairly safe to assume people have read up to Chapter 11. So What are your thoughts? What do you like? What do you think could be improved? What are you hoping to see? What are you praying you don't see? Anything confusing?
Remember, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, if someone says they hope they see a kink you don't like, be respectful. You can say you hope it doesn't go there, but DO NOT ATTACK THE OTHER PATRON.
I will be happy to discuss.
Comments (6)
Long time no see... I'd love to read a new chapter. I agree with the above post. Seeing the religious zealots "converted" is fun, and the investigation could have posed a threat but it seems it's been dealt with a bit too easily, story-wise. I hope we'll soon see more developments here.
"Seems" to have been dealt with easily. He thinks he's taken care of it. That doesn't mean it's gone.
That being said -- I do like the tool he is using to gain understanding, skills and knowledge in his "hypnotherapy" session. That was a clever idea.
I'm glad you like it! I thought it gave him a way to support himself and helps that victims come to him, essentially. It key me play around at the start.
While I generally enjoy the story -- it is becoming a bit predictable. Our hero is seriously OP. I am not sure where you are going to be able to take this other than as a fun sexual romp with character development as his partners evolve. Maybe he will encounter something that he can't deal with or that really poses a dilemma. But so far, that doesn't seem to be the case.
I really like the balance of "once control is established, he has incredible control, but before he has control he's actually incredibly vulnerable. If someone were able to resist that control, his house of cards could collapse in an instant.