Too Good To Be True Ch. 32
My editors, Pandamonium and DaveDeSade have finished with this, and I've had a chance to go through their suggestions, so no need to make you wait any longer. I hope you enjoy the chapter!
Google Docs link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18ctJqsz-GAlqD_AENJHVt6e_6gInnoC412-K0LLCXxs/edit?usp=sharing
Comments (14)
This is a story line I have been reading for over a year on another site. When do we see a new set of chapters for this guy and gal's ;[
I'm still working on A Hero's Rebirth Ch. 10. As soon as it is finished being written (And is sent to the editors) I'll post a poll here to determine which story gets a chapter next. If this story is most voted for, it will get the chapter next. If not, it will take until it is voted next up. So... hard to say?
Just caught up. Love this and A Hero’s rebirth. Keep them coming!
I'm glad you are enjoying this! It will continue.
Not sure which story arc I like more, this one or A Hero’s Rebirth. I’ll admit I enjoy A Very Friendly Neighborhood, but those 2 are my favorites.
I'm pleasantly surprised by that! I thought this work (while one of my longest) was one of my weakest showings. I didn't write the early chapters knowing I'd publish, so I didn't hold myself to the same standards I started using after I started publishing. I've also gotten a lot of criticism for the early chapters with the blackmail, degrading sex, and watersports. I guess haters are usually the loudest, so it is nice to hear the fans more. Thank you!
Is it possible to get the all the chapters on to this site like you have done with hero so we can do a binge session on each story I know it’s on lit but it would be nice to have it here also and it’s an easy platform to use. I’m enjoying your content very much.
This is another good candidate for that. I don't want to try and do that with stories short enough that I can fit more in the version I'd be putting here. I put chapters 1-7 of A Hero's Rebirth in a single doc because that's all I could fit. I don't think all 32 chapters of Too Good To Be True could fit in a single doc, so I could do a doc with chapters 1 through (what fits) in one doc then see if I have enough to do a second one. I don't want it to be "Chapter's X through Current" because then its another thing I have to do when I post it. Re-upload the updated PDF. (Still easier than working with Lit to fix something.) Does that make sense?
Have to agree, it´s really good chapter. Hope you will continue with another chapter before other stories. That´s my preference.
I'm glad you love this story so much, but I have to stick to my Round Robin writing. Otherwise someone who loves another story as much as you love this one, won't get chapters at all.
Yeah to another amazingly written chapter. One small problem stop leaving me wanting more (joking sorta).keep pushing the chapters out when you can they are enjoyed.
I'm glad you like it so much!
Thanks! Was waiting for this one!
I always just wish I could get them out faster!