Hypnotherapist Ch. 14 - Uncensored/Literotica versions
Pandamonium tells me she believes these are ready so here we go! The next Chapter of Hypnotherapist! As we have discussed, I will be posting the Uncensored version and the Literotica versions. There isn't a huge difference, and if you check out both, you'll probably notice they are mostly the same.
Trigger warning: Both versions have a survivor of Domesitc/Child abuse talking about their experience. The Hypnotherapist actually does some therapy... shocking. In the Uncensored version, the Domestic/Child abuse is sexual in nature, and she discusses being sodomized. She does not go into great detail, it is not graphic. I don't take pleasure in a child being treated that way, but it shows her motivations and why she is how she is better. I do not glorify the act. If you would rather, in the Literotica version, instead she is subject to violence instead and discusses some of the injuries she received instead of the sexual assault. If that is not something you want to read (either way), you can skip this chapter. I understand those are sensitive subjects, but I like the idea of writing characters who have been through hard things, but rise, recover, move on, and are able to live normal lives and enjoy normal things. I'm putting this warning here, and in the start of the chapter, so please no one accuse me of not warning you what was coming. The discussion (either way) is a minor part of the chapter, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapter and this doesn't spoil it for you.
If you are good with that warning, I hope you enjoy. I like how it turned out, and I hope you do two.
Google Docs links:
Uncensored:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WXzfBVAaZkmPCE5oiFDq2XprRpCUx5USS0RkLk4Y1Nk/edit?usp=sharing
Literotica Version:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f6or1ngRua5ekq010i-GyU8lGrZDICHl68RjJqZy2_0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments (4)
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I have fixed it. Ironically, I found and fixed it on one of the versions, but not the other. Thanks for helping me fix it in both.
I read the unedited version, can see were lits rules might be a problem. But I loved the arc of the chapter. Without the trauma being talked about would have hurt the flow of the chapter. And great writing thanks for pushing it out this month.
Yeah, I feel like the physical violence of the Lit-safe version is A) nearly as bad, having a trusted adult, especially a parent, striking and beating a child is psychologically damaging in a similar manner to sexually assaulting then (yes, sexually assaulting them is worse, but child beaters are pretty dang close to child molesters in my esteem and I wish worse penalties for both); 2) Not as compelling a motive; 3) Not talking about it doesn't make it not happen, and having good outcomes for survivors in stories helps give hope, validation, and closure to real survivors. And Lit gets crazy strict with their rules. Nothing underage means nothing, and while I support protecting children, I think it is also stupid to pretend nothing happens. Google says the average age for girls currently (according to planned parenthood) is 17, so less girls make it to 18 as virgins then do. So pretending nothing sexual happens before 18 is a little crazy. I do understand laws get prickly in some places though, so I see why they do it. And things like this are about as crazy as I plan on getting, I don't plan on spreading any 16-17 year old legs in my stories. Though, even having a sibling walk in, go "oh shit! Put a sock or tie on the doorknob or something!" And leave is too much for Literotica.