SAO Part II ver0.3

打完最新的章节，做一个小反馈：首先剧情和对话上回到了最好的感觉上，能有效推动剧情又不显着繁杂，人物互动上也回到了我所喜欢的感觉上，角色间互动量不变，但抛弃了繁杂的对话和扭捏无用的感情，保留了最简洁也最能引领玩家性奋的内容。 战斗方面优化满分，有慢慢磨看的剧情，也有杀怪、过场景才会变化的剧情，并且怪可以被一刀秒，减少了重复内容的时间。 其余优点的话，列车上的小游戏给个赞，虽然最后两个选项指向同一个结尾有点怪，但鉴于工作量可以理解，这种内容建议多来点。 cg方面，对于这次的分屏cg给予好评，希望配角和路人角色能再多来些。 一些修改建议：回忆房间的不安值建议多点，再上一个章节我把内容基本全开了，结果来到这个章节基本没有不安值增加，回忆房间只有100点，全开大概需要200多，想看之前的内容看不到，建议根据不同的章节进入给予不同的不安值或者直接开启前面所有的内容。

I commented before, but I'll just say it again one last time. Whenever you make an update, ALWAYS include the girl's perspective. The fact that there was no Asuna perspective is extremely disappointing. Take your time in making the updates. Please do not release an update where we cannot see the perspective of the girl, especially when it's Asuna! The last time this happened was from another game that I was supporting called 'NTR'd By Clumsiness', but the developer didn't include the girl's perspective in one update. Due to that, A LOT of people stopped their memberships. I just stopped mines because it's not worth paying right now only to be given an update that's not complete. I'm sorry. That's just how it is. I'm paying you for a product to be delivered completed. When you release an update that's not complete and then try to make excuses, that's not acceptable. You just lose supporters and will have people waiting to get a leaked version to play it. Hopefully your vacation will help you to get the rest you need. But the next time you make updates, please make sure they are completed with all perspectives and not just from Kirito's perspective.

个人觉得故事推进有些过快了，同意评论老哥说的故事细腻程度>H，一点点堕落的感觉应该会更棒，最后作者大大辛苦，希望好好休息，后续慢慢更新就好

I am surprised by the sudden escalation between Inoda and Asuna in FOG, more so that the events in FOG and real life did not necessary point towards that. I know that Inoda mentioned to Asuna that he wants to move their physical relationship in FOG, however it definitely felt sudden and rushed to see Asuna going the full course in the tree house. I presume things will be more clear once the Asuna perspective of the events is in the game. Furthermore, I just hope that Asuna is not just going to use her pity for Inoda as her only logic behind her actions. At least her pity should not be the only factor in her actions. An angle from which Asuna actions can be justified is her frustration or desire for pleasure, and the fact that FOG offers her a plausible deniability for herself. In my opinion, Asuna corruption should take an inward approach where she corrupts herself just as much Inoda is scheming toward corrupting her. This way, Asuna actions will feel more genuine and also show more of the character she did not let out while being with Kirito. In regards with the message at the end from the author Fujino, I fully understand the needs and challenges that you face and will advise in making the update cycle be 2 months long instead of the current monthly one. Getting bite sized updates which do not have all the contents to form a clear story narrative or direction does not help in the long run. And I will say is more harmful as players/supporters in time will get the impression that the updates are incomplete or lack proper set up and in the end still choosing to play the game more rarely while waiting for more content to add. Which might as well have a more financial impact than just letting the supporters know that longer a development cycle is needed for the quality they desire. A good example for the above is the Alice story that was skipped this update together with the missing of Asuna perspective on her action in the treehouse, but it can apply to Sugu or Sinon as well. To be fair, Alice story in this update does not feel to be critical for the main plot between Asuna and Inoda. I hope too see Alice story next update, it made me quite intriqued on the developments with her investigation and Klein luck. Likewise covering characters story in proper sequence would have given a more clear narrative direction in relation with their role in the plot, and it would have made ones relevancy in the story more obvious. I would say that keeping the side characters relevant can serve to bring more creative freedom than just focusing on the main plot all the time. I'm hoping that we could get one or two updates focused on side characters at some point. All in all, I am trying to say that the side characters inclusion needs more relevance to the main plot or goals while also offering enough creative freedom to not just feel like filler content.

Ci-en 的dlsite 有0.32版本這邊怎麼還沒有

感谢大大百忙中的制作与更新！！！！ 如果可以 能把树屋的CG弄成常亮吗 求求了 或者把这段的CG包发一下！ 再次感谢！！！

一下子推进有点快，但是也许更多人喜欢这个速度吧。我个人还是喜欢剧情细腻度＞H。不过确实众口难调啊。之后会出不同选项影响结局吗？虽然是ntr但是还是想有HE和BE的选项

Proud of you my dude keep being amazing and making great content

Thanks mate

浅大辛苦了

I like suguha story

6.11講完話回家看電腦有出現Bug 在打開博客的地方要點擊照片會出現載入失敗

辛苦了，我跟你一样也是在加班，每天加班，放工回到家都是吃了冲凉直接倒在床上睡去了（有时没冲凉直接睡去XD

Hmm, I'll be honest. I do love that there are more Asuna and Inoda, but the fact that the H-scenes in the tree aren't included in this update is very disappointing. You don't have to rush to meet monthly deadlines. We all understand that you have other things to do and it's exhausting, but that's why we want you to take your time to release a complete update. Every update that has Asuna and inoda NEEDS to have Asuna's perspective. I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to stop my membership until the next update when it's more complete. Or perhaps when everything is done.

已经因为大佬的作品，胃口提升，对其它游戏很难产生兴趣了，呜呜呜

Hi everyone, if you're enjoy the game and you're affordable, please take action support Fujino reduce his burdens and more work life balance. It is not sustainable working like hell and continue updating game. Let's take action support Fujino before we lost the game. So Fujino can continues update this amazing game.

各位，如果你希望淺大的作品，如果负担的起请用实际行动支持淺大，减轻淺大的负担，脱离社畜生活。 又要加班又要创造这样淺大可能撑不了多久。为了避免游戏断更，让我们采取行动，让淺大可持续提供优质更新。

Brilliant update. I can really tell that you took everyone’s criticism in mind this time round. The storyline was simple to follow and delivered everything that I’ve come to love and expect from your work. Suspense, mystery NTR and all around great scenes. Well done, long may this type of work continue! Keep doing what you do best!

辛苦了，感恩你在辛苦加班后为我们制作优质的游戏。希望大大可以脱离社畜苦海，找到良心企业。我们会继续支持。 多多休息，保重身体。

淺大，这次会有cg包么

Lately I have seen that many creators who are here on this platform and others (such as pixiv) are complaining why there are pages that upload the content of all creators illegally, literally upload the post copied and pasted with links and everything I feel that this greatly affects the growth of all artists. So it is already very common that each link to mega has a password (only those who pay have access) please be very careful we do not want something like this to bring problems to this work.

起于雨夜，终于雨夜，接下来就是现实生活的彻底侵蚀沦陷了，虽然还是想着蛇岛什么时候死啊

I love it this update was amazing I am really enjoying Asuna's corruption, I like that it is little by little, and that she is uncomfortable with Kirito because he has other priorities, I really liked the conditions that Asuna's mother put on him, that means Kirito will be busier and Inoda can take advantage of that, ( by the way the scenes with the mother are GOD). We love this job master FUJINO and if you need to take the time as the hen in the game says it's ok we have no problem we want you to be at 100% of your abilities I know that lately you have been having problems with how to pace this story, but I think I speak for everyone when I say that the best thing is for you to handle it the way you want to personally I love how it is going at the moment but I like the initiatives you take, too much. PS: I would like (if you can, of course) that in the replay room in the section where Asuna and Inoda do it in the tree that there was a section of how they talk to each other and a scene focused entirely on what they say and the moans of her and how she enjoys it, without having to force to see the Kirito fight btw: ( I also love the scenes like that where Kirito fights but Inoda does his thing )

This update is extremely good! Thank you for the great work!

Thanks for your hard work! :D

🫅🏻 < - Fujino

and here i was wondering what i was going to do with some free time. praise be!

感謝大大!!!請好好休息~

Is this updated version of the CG bag going to be released?

这次内容十分棒，如果可以取消一闪一闪的效果就好了，或者现在还有CG包吗

Awesome update. Stealth ntr is the best

感谢大佬！劳逸结合，别给自己太大压力！好好休息！

感謝大大，要多保重身體

辛苦了淺上大~!好好休息一下吧~!祝新年快樂~!身體健康!

辛苦了

好耶

Mega link asking for password (?)

LETS GOOOO!

辛苦了 請好好休息

Thank you for long hard work!

This is why I came in on time)

感謝更新 辛苦了