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铺垫有点太长了，反而有点枯燥，中间最好多插入点肉戏过渡一下，过于无脑或者过于复杂都不太好，希望能找到个平衡点

It might be a good idea to take a break from this project and start working on mini projects instead. I know you gained a lot of popularity as a result of this series but tunneling into it isn't a good idea. You are skilled as a writer, there is no need to limit yourself to one project. Just work on some new projects to experiment and see how the community feels about it.

One more thought of mine: Although I've seen some people disagree with me on this, personally I'm not a fan of Inoda stealing all the girls in Kirito's life (I confess I wasn't a big fan of him fucking Asuna's mother, but it's something that I'll have to learn to accept it, since it already happened). I think I would be fine if Inoda at some point started fucking Lizbeth together with Asuna, but I would add just her to Inoda's fun (And Asuna should still be the main girl and biggest obsession for Inoda). I think an ending where Asuna leaves Kirito to become Inoda's girlfriend and Lizbeth takes the opportunity to steal Kirito, but is shown to occasionally cheat on him with Inoda, would be nice (In this situation I would like Inoda getting to fuck Lizbeth at some point, I think that could be a great ending. But that's just me, I'm just sharing my thoughts here in case someone agrees and sees value in some of them).

朋友们，浅大好像采用了一个绝佳的剧情，我读出来了，现在只是在铺垫，交代这个剧情之所以会发生的前置设定（如果真的是这个剧情，确实值得为此交代清楚为何会发生，而不是突然就草率的发生了，变成让玩家觉得爽，但不会成为令人印象深刻的，会记很久的爽），为了大家的游戏体验，我不能在这里剧透，但如果真的是跟我猜测的一样的话，这绝对会是近几年NTR游戏的经典一幕。除了更新节奏对于玩家的体验影响之外，你们担心的剧情问题应该基本都在范围内，只是还没到剧情的转折点，越过那个关键点后情节会迎来起飞，各种NTR神展开会顺理成章的发生。。。 如果后续真的跟我猜测的一样，没想到会是星期四？我以为会更久一点，比如在周末Asuna和Kirito更加浪漫的氛围里发生转折。但根据大家的反应来看，目前的阶段拖太久可能确实会引起更多人的不满，从我个人来说，还是更希望一个神作的诞生，而不是为了迎合一个阶段的玩家情绪而草率的加速未经合理化的情节，但为了保证作者的收益来满足持续的创作动力也是必须考虑的。 这里有个想法浅大可以参考一下，在更新剧情上，从商业剧作的角度来安排一下节奏，把剧情安排呈一定规律，比如，更新一：【接上一次更新的剧情】→【渐入高潮】→【交代高潮】→【下一次更新剧情的引子】，更新二：【接上一次更新的剧情】→【渐入高潮】→【交代高潮】→【下一次更新剧情的引子】。然后在每两三个周期小高潮里铺垫一个大高潮，类似于Netflix或者Marvel的剧作结构，这样形成循环，可以让每次更新玩家都会有爽点，从而在开发中不断正向的滚动壮大爱好者群体，持续增强粘性，并且吸纳新人。 这次的问题在于，铺垫很多，然后完全没怎么有爽点（或者说爽点被过于前置了，认为Kirito强奸Asuna那一段算情节是一个小高潮，但它被放在了【渐入高潮】的位置上，而【交代高潮】和【下一次更新的引子】的阶段全部被用来相对平淡的铺设定，并且收尾时没有明显的悬念。建议一个更新内的故事周期中大的【交代高潮】放在7、8分的位置上，后面用2分短促的交代【下一次更新剧情的引子】，而这个‘引子’最好伴随下次更新时前面会出现与‘悬念-引子’链接起的一个周期内的小小高潮，或者隐晦的小高潮），这导致理解剧情的玩家被寸止（而且还是那种不怎么明显没达到点上的寸止，类似于爽过一发，第二发刚撸一半还没来感觉就忽然停了，甚至不是在来感觉后在临界点之前急停，类似雨夜前夕那种？），不理解剧情的玩家一头雾水，以为变故事大纲了（就我的理解，大纲应该没变，只是修辞手法根据玩家的建议有些调整，最终肯定是以Asuna为主乱搞一气，Kirito只能看吃不到的）。 即时更新的性质目前应该只有这样做才能不断的扩大观众粘性，除非是一次完成后放到dlsite或者steam上卖，但那需要承担一个漫长的开发周期，而且面临宣发费用不足，或者摸不准玩家风向，自己闷头一口气完成，投入宣发后销售成绩不如意的风险。

I personally don't mind the slow progress as long as you give us more sex scenes in the future to compensate. I like that the relationship between Inoda and Asuna had a bit of a reset because of how Inoda basically forced her to have sex with him. It's pretty obvious that Asuna would want to stay away from him after that. Of course, the progress shouldn't be as slow as in the first game, but I like that Inoda needs to take his time to manipulate her into going back into a sexual relationship. It would've been a bad move to make Asuna unable to resist/stop Inoda's advances immediately. If you rushed that, it would make Asuna like any other generic NTR heroine. Corruption should be slow. Asuna should be hard to get. That's what makes her worth it. I do however agree with some people that you shouldn't make Inoda TOO nice. It's fine that he's a scumbag that wants to take advantage of Asuna underneath all that pretending. He should be guilt-tripping her instead of making her happy. I honestly don't like handjob scenes that much, but the handjob scene was pretty good in this one. I especially like the cheerleader uniform, so I hope that there will be more cheerleader uniform scenes in the future. I'm also interested in how you'll use the 'fetish' system. I have no clue on how it will be used, but I am looking forward to it. (Btw, I'm into feet and armpits, so more scenes pls) I don't really care much about Sinon. I'm here for the NTR, and Kirito hasn't really developed his relationship with her in this series, so I have nothing to say about her scenes. I have a bit of mixed feelings about Suguha's situation. I stated in the past that I didn't particularly mind her being with Hebishima, but I feel like it could've been handled a bit better. I don't feel anything about her for some reason, and it bothers me. I think it's because we never really saw full conversations between her and Hebishima outside of sexual encounters, so I'm not as invested in her situation. Or maybe it's because of Hebishima after all. I don't really like his type in NTRs. I prefer the ugly bastards or even erogakis over the delinquents. I also have mixed feelings towards Liz. It seems like the 'villainess Liz' is pretty popular among SAO parodies, but unfortunately, I'm not really a fan of that. I don't like femdom. My hopes for her was that she would be an innocent victim of NTR by an irritated Inoda (because of his lack of progress with Asuna), similar to Asuna's mom. And that he'll somehow use her as a pawn to get some advantages in his quest to conquer Asuna. But I guess that's not happening now. I have high hopes for Alice, but I fear that it might go down a route that I don't want it to. While I do like corruption, I don't like 'corruption by a bunch of random strangers'. I like it when the heroines get corrupted by someone they know, someone we know. The 'dark' city in FOG being used against the heroines is nice, but it should be used near endgame when they are pretty much corrupted already. My personal hopes for Alice is that she'll develop a romantic interest in Kirito, but she'll be taken advantage of by Klein. Yes, I want Klein to end up NTR'ing her from Kirito. I actually expected Agil to NTR Suguha when I first saw her working in the cafe, but whatever, I guess. Hopefully this time, I see an NTR by a character from the OG cast. I just want more NTR basically. I expected this to be full of NTR scenes, but the only ones being NTR'ed are Asuna and Sugu. Despite my criticizing, still, a job well done. You've easily turned into one of my favorite creators. A good plot and characterization that's really close to the original's, slow corruption of heroines, character designs that are faithful to the original, animated sex scenes with sex voices. You know what you're doing. Keep it up! And please, MORE CHEERLEADER SCENES IN THE FUTURE!

For me the problem lies in the last update. the battle with the tree and the upcoming massage already gave everything needed to seduce Asuna. And this update should have finally given the development of the main action of the game. Asuna and Inoda. But no. It all dragged on too long, too much focus on Asuna's mother, too much focus on trying to portray a natural seduction. Intional ruining of Kirito's character to make Asuna lean more towards Inoda. But that's not NTR. Anything else, but that's not NTR. And honestly after the last update, I don't see how this can go back to the path of NTR. Kirito, who has seen many things and is confident in himself in the update turns into a clown, Inoda, the rapist and scumbag from the first part, turns into a great guy from all sides. And Asuna starts to resemble a mediocre love harem girl with schizophrenia and pity syndrome. It seemed to me from the first part that the scumbag Inoda should steal Asuna away from the awesome Kirito, not because Kirito is bad at everything and Asuna is willing to sleep with the first guy she meets out of pity, but because pleasure will overpower the voice of reason. I hope fujino will look at his first games, think well where this second part went. Graphically the game itself is very good, the stats and the windows in the menu with body parts are great, but it's hardly revealed in any way except for a couple scenes.

Hello Fujino, I love your games and the SAO game is my fav NTR game. I think part 2 improved a lot of things from part 1 (especially the graphics and gameplay), and I'm liking part 2, but I think the direction you did in part 1 was better. I'm going to share some thoughts that I hope can be of some help for your ideas in upcoming updates: I think it's interesting to explain a little of Inoda's fixation on Asuna and his obsession about stealing her from Kirito (I think giving some hints about this makes the NTR more exciting), but nothing too deep or trying to make the players feel sorry for him. I think it's important that you let Inoda be the sneaky bastard villain he was in part 1, it's nice and I like Inoda's character PRETENDING to be a decent person to manipulate and deceive Asuna, but that's it, you don't have to make him truly decent in any way. One of the things that makes the NTR you write good is seeing the bad guy winning and the MC girlfriend preferring the villain at the end because of the sexual pleasure she gets with him (so I think making Inoda somehow a decent person is bad for your game). In this update I don't dislike the handjob scene, I think it was enjoyable, but I thought it would have been much better if to make Asuna get to the point where she gives him a handjob, Inoda used an approach of appearing sad and jealous for realizing what Asuna did with Kirito in the kitchen when they were in FOG. And then Inoda could have acted at that moment manipulating Asuna's guilt and protective instinct to make her do that handjob for him. I think one of the cool things about Inoda's character is when he acts sneaky or tries to manipulate Asuna into feeling sorry for him so that he can get his way into doind lewd things with her (and then she starts to like it because he has a good dick, good stamina + acts more naughtier/bold than Kirito when doing lewd things in a way that makes her feel more aroused, even though she still doesn't admit it). Eventually she can develop into accepting doing things with him not out of pity and protective instinct, but because she likes having sex with him. I had a few more things I wanted to say, but I'm short on time right now. The main thing I think is this, the rest I have in mind maybe I'll come back here and talk later.

I'm overall liking things as they are progressing. We have to remember that Inoda pretty much forced himself on Asuna at the end of the first episode. It's going to take some time to build that back up. No matter how good it ended up feeling, and how she occasionally looks back to that event, it's going to take some time to build up that trust again. She's already back to giving him handies. I also like how Liz is being used in the story to manipulate events and people to get what she wants. I would really like to see her eventually win over Kirito or at least coerces him enough to have sex with her to cause an even greater rift in the Asuna and Kirito relationship. Asuna is already having doubts about him after the forced sex, and it hurt too, whereas with Inoda, she was is a pleasurable bliss. I'd say keep things up the way they are going, and if anything, feel free to delay a patch drop if you feel the segment you're working on (Thursday in this case) would be an overall boon for your updates. Keep up the good work and thanks for good times.

In addition to my previous comments, I'll say that if not to remake the whole game, at least take a closer look at the last update. It killed the last feel of NTR, made Kirito into a clown, made Inoda into a good guy. Now there's no feeling of Inoda seducing Asuna and no feeling of Asuna loving Kirito with her heart and longing for Inoda with her body. Now it's just an Inoda love story where Asuna will choose Inoda because he's just a cool, nice guy who is superior to Kirito in every way. Inoda is supposed to be a scumbag who is pushing exactly Asuna's sexual feelings, her body's desires. But here we get an emotional connection between them and it immediately kills the whole NTR turning this into a weird love story. I will repeat again, look at your first game please, we don't have to see and we don't have to be immediately told exactly how the seduction happened. Leave it behind the scenes, give only hints, pop up pictures and sneak peeks. The battle with the tree was a ray of light in this dark realm of text, flashbacks and dreams. !And please make the pop-up pictures stay longer on the screen, please.

周四内容做完以后发出来全补档会不会好一点

Just make the game you want to make. Trying to cater to everyone’s wishes means you’re actually catering to nobody and ultimately spending time doing things you don’t actually want to do. Ignore the hate, just make the game as you want it to be. You’ve made incredible works in the past, and you only ever seem to improve with each new update.

作品篇幅大了以后，人物立体感也强了，歪果哥们说的隐奸感NTR消失其实就是因为猪田从一个猥琐强X色情巨弔猪工具变成了一个不断讨好本子娜渴望上位的可怜备胎，雌堕的刺激以及女角色的反差感随着人物形象不断丰满在减弱，但是重做大可不必，只能说等个契机提升一波刺激感与背德感才是不少人关注浅大作品的第一追求。（虽然我个人还挺喜欢看乱七八糟男女故事的，毕竟亨得里亚编年史也这吊样），浅大保持自己的风格即可，众口难调毕竟，期待直叶后面的表现~猪田和本子娜感情升温的契机无怪乎肉欲无法满足，脆弱，受刺激的时候本子桐不在身边（比如看到京子出轨or京子被开火车or父母矛盾or被直叶喷or须乡乱入or栗子搞事），倒是可以考虑复刻一波第二雨夜（仅个人想法）

说起来，当时的问卷投票，我也选的是慢进度发展 因为当时第一部结束，雨夜亚丝娜已经和猪田发生了关系，所以我的本意是，不希望亚丝娜像miel游戏里的女主角一样，被啪啪啪一次以后就即堕成了痴女，而是希望有一个循序渐进的过程。 但像现在这样两人的关系又退化回了原点，一切从零开始，我认为又有点过头了，这显得第一部的剧情，两人之间发生过的事情完全不存在了一样，当然这也有第二部制作进度比较慢的原因在里面 关于这次更新一些对话尤其是猪田的内心活动，我个人是认为比较冗余的，毕竟ntr游戏里，看点是苦主的内心从不知情到得知真相后的痛苦与挣扎，会关注女主心情与肉体的转变，但黄毛。。。黄毛的原动力不就是好色嘛（笑），如果黄毛的种种也写的太多，那就变成了黄毛为主角的纯爱小说了。 其实，正因为作者时间有限，每次更新的量都不太多，更建议好钢用在刀刃上，吃力不讨好花大量时间写各种配角或者黄毛的心理活动，还不如多加一张CG，不是说一开始就要真刀真枪的干，但诸如搂搂抱抱亲亲摸摸都是可以的，毕竟他们的关系是已经到这一步了，为以后的提枪上马也做了铺垫 就我个人而言，与其为猪田的各种心理活动花费大量时间，还不如在他如何“作恶”的方式上花更多心思，毕竟NTR游戏的剧情也可以有很多表现形式 比如桐人现在有了变态值，那故事的发展就有了多样性的可能，变态值高了，故事就可以让桐人主动向绿奴线发展 相对的大家喜欢隐奸，也可以让猪田的行动更加主动，亚丝娜从身体到心理不断堕落最后出墙，而桐人不安值虽高却只是怀疑始终抓不到实际证据的背德感是很吸引人的。 或者干脆就让桐人有什么把柄落在了猪田的手里，剧情向“太太你也不想……”这样发展，亚丝娜始终坚持“你得到我的身体但得不到我的心”也是很有趣的 总之我的意思是，作为一个合格的黄毛，还是应该多做少说；而一个精彩的牛头人黄油，让玩家多吃肉少灌水才是皆大欢喜的事情啊

My final thought: you need to rework the second part, the game has lost the suspense, mystery and NTR. the game has lost the fun. Go back to basics, don't try to please everyone, cut down the plot and characters, focus mainly on Asuna Kirito and Inoda. Let more events happen in the FOG. Then after a hard day's work, we can open your game and relax to the hot pictures. Of course, it's your game and your ideas will be implemented in it, but for example, the first part of the game is very cool, hot and exciting. It also has a lot of mystery in it. It's simple and fun. And I think the pop-up picture has to stay on the screen for at least 5 seconds (or until you tap on the screen), or if it disappears too fast, I don't even have time to look at it.

Regardless of everything love the game and hope your enjoying making it in your vision keep being amazing

If you would want any feedback from me, it's that I think you should release updates every 2 or 3 months versus doing a monthly update. I don't know if your own vision is a slower pace, but if it is then it might be better to focus on releasing updates in terms of arcs so that you're more likely to hit bigger pay off moments instead of what might feel like filler to people in every update. I think people really liked the battle with the Dryad, and that wasn't really possible to do back in October, but you were able to add it in just recently. So being able to take more time to reach these higher payoff moments is probably more likely to be appreciated as it seems like people are unhappy with being drip fed incomplete works. Personally if you keep going a monthly pace I'm all for it, but I think it might help yourself out a little more.

I was thinking and I responded the same thing to a friend below in the comments of this post and we would I would like Asuna to enter a little more into corruption and let herself be driven by the feeling of feeling good not so much by the feeling of guilt. Inoda already showed us that he played pathetic to be pitiful and it worked to such a degree that he already managed to have it for the first time, so I would like that little by little Asuna is carried away more by the feeling that sex with Inoda feels better and she is dissatisfied with Kirito.

玩完之后对于这次内容的一些建议：（纯主观想法，没有任何攻击想法） 1、个人是因为ntr内容入坑的，对于男女主之间的H内容（包括类似于电锯人温泉里主角和mkm、这次为了让直叶黑化亚丝娜掉好感的强上）并无大感，虽然对于后者这种推进主线的接受度更高一些，但是希望减少或剪短内容。 2、希望可以有几个黄毛与不同女主之间的交互与H，因为不同黄毛的不同性格，想看更多的不同角色之间的交互。 3、希望主要角色有轮X戏码，例如像体育馆篮球队轮x女主或者图书管理员，这是个人看本爱好，如果大佬不喜可以pass。 4、对于利兹这个角色，因为个人对女s男m戏码无感，所以对于利兹与猪田互动觉着不太有意思，不过我想看类似于高傲女被反杀的剧情。 5、相对于直叶黑化绿男主的剧情，我个人更喜欢直叶黑化把男主身边人都拉下坑的剧情，这个可以与2相配合。 6、希望路人女性的剧情再多来点，例如每次更新做2天内容主线和半天内容路人or支线这样，非常喜欢大佬前几部里面对于一些路人女性H的内容 7、非常喜欢这次对于战斗轮的优化，希望在无H内容或者H内容已经浏览过时候可以选择进入自动战斗。 bug：在周三去学校时候游戏还有强制关闭情况，最后一天去工会领任务之后再对话还会重复领任务，不影响游戏但可以优化

Странно что Сугуха что то еще чувствует к Кирито, ведь она уже должна принадлежать Хибишиме по правилам НТР. Тоже думал на счет измены Кирито с Сугухой, чтобы склонить Асуну на отношения с Кирито, но шантажировать самого Кирито не нужно. ГГ куколд в НТР не должен знать о растлении его пассии, максимум подозревать.

Honestly I believe that Inoda should receive zero thought put behind him. We don't need his background story, we don't need to connect with him, we don't need anything from him other than him corrupting Asuna. Getting his backstory and having us try to feel bad for him kills the NTR because then it's like "Oh well he deserves asuna anyway" so now it's just some awkward romance story. I would say just focus on kirito. Have his story told from his perspective. Have events happen in the background that pop up like comic strips while kirito does other things, more battle CG moments, shadowplay, peeking into Inoda's apartment. Things like that. Leave it like how it was in part 1, where it was a mystery NTR where the MC sees a bunch of things happening or hears it but has no idea that asuna, suguha, and all the other girls are actually doing these things. That's how you've made all your other NTR games and they are beautiful works of art. I wouldn't change how you make YOUR games for the sake of catering to those who come in and ask you to change it. Mystery NTR is what drew people in. Other than that your games are works of art and you are doing a very good job. Do not feel pressured to release things early or to rush. If it takes a couple days to finish up the update, that's perfectly fine and would actually be better for everyone. You don't have to rush and can rest easier, and everyone is happy with a more complete update.

制作不易，浅大辛苦了，转型一定会有适应期，众口难调这也是没办法的事，作为长篇我觉得多一些人物方面的动作语言细节其实挺好，让猪田更加立体，至于节奏慢，现在才0.25，毕竟长篇到完全版还有很多版本，文字多，因人而异吧，我个人而言对大量CG，反而喜欢慢慢转变的过程，还有从语言细节上发现端倪的乐趣。制作速度这方面浅大已经做的很不错了，比不少一个月个一两个图，几个月更个小版本的好太多了。唯一希望浅大不要烂尾，加油！

My thoughts regarding Inoda and NTR antagonists in general: IMO, it adds a lot to the sense of corruption if the heroine falls to the antagonist in spite of them being a scumbag who only wants them for sex. Like, she clearly shouldn't be doing this and the reasonable part of her knows that, but the dick is just THAT good and she can't resist, lol. My favorite NTR storylines are ones where the protagonist is a fantastic partner in pretty much every area EXCEPT sex, and the target is corrupted by a villain who either: a) tricks a good-hearted heroine by acting like a nice/pathetic guy (Inoda in part 1 definitely falls into this). b) coerces or deceives a naive or weak-willed heroine with their forceful personality c) blackmails or otherwise uses nefarious means to coerce a strong-willed heroine. If an NTR antagonist is just a legitimately nice guy who seems like he'd be a better all-around partner to the heroine AND his dick is just that good, it ends up feeling like I'm reading a weird vanilla romance storyline where the girl refuses to make a choice that is clearly good for her because of a sense of guilt and loyalty to an unlikeable protagonist. I don't mind if a villain pretends to be a nice guy at first, but at some point the veil needs to drop and the girl needs to realize who they really are, then decide to stick around anyway despite them KNOWING it's a bad idea.

这次更新剧情算自第二部面世以来的第二次大惊喜，辛苦大大了，基本能看到猪亚的后续发展模式！！要说感到有缺憾的地方，大概就两个：（1）亚总妈奇葩人设，和猪乱搞还比原著更看不起男主，虽然在黄油追求逻辑有点傻，但观感实在有点差，个人感觉只要桐人“出轨”就够了；（2）猪亚剧情推进慢。第一部亚丝娜沦陷其实挺慢了，具体理由也是圣母+身体潜在欲望，但每一步的cg都很棒所以很爱；在此基础上的第二部，会更期待失身后的cg，而且“第二次失身”的契机很明显是利兹，但迟迟不见，确实挺有落差的。

I'm fine with slow pace and dialogue, since it helps develop the relationships, if the romantic relationship between Asuna and Kirito is used to make the feeling of loss stronger when she falls then it's fine. About self-insert, that's never good in any work, and tacking a step back on that would be good. My only problem with the direction of the game is that it's turning into a "every girl likes Kirito" much like the original story, making it feel like a harem with NTR on the side instead of a NTR game. That's why I said on the previous post I think Hebishima is needed to keep Suguha away from him, like he managed in the first part and was great, I don't see why reverting everything. I think the right thing would be developing him more instead of the current direction.

In this update we realized that Asuna is one step away from becoming corrupted, I would like (just an opinion) that she will start thinking more that doing it with Inoda gives her more pleasure, that she starts thinking more about him and how it feels to do private things with him. I love the slow process of the NTR and how little by little Kirito neglects Asuna and Inoda takes advantage of that.

I liked the update. You will ofcourse alway's see more bad comments than good, as people who have no complaints won't say anything on the posts. I like the slow pace and the development of the side characters (especially suguha). The only thing that does not bring any real value for me is the anxiety meter and the cuckhold meter, as you are already telling a story with them involved.

建议可以改成两个月一更，目前的数量有点意犹未尽

In my opinion the game is not progressing, Inoda has everything to convince Asuna to have sex in FOG with the excuse that it's not a real thing. But it doesn't happen. Instead, Asuna starts doing lewd things in the real world. I thought that in part 2 Inoda would first get Asuna to do lewd things in FOG and we'd see a lot of lewd fight scenes and scenes like in the sewer and bandit camp where Asuna and Inoda are left alone while Kirito fights monsters. And then the lewd stuff would transfer to the real world. Instead it feels like the game wants to explain everyone's thoughts and all their actions, there's no sense of mystery or excitement. Inoda and Asuna's mother had more development. I would like to see more scenes like in the sewers or the bandit camp. For example Liz made a mistake with the teleporter and would have sent Kirito separately from Inoda and Asuna. And we would only see pop-ups of what's going on between Inoda and Asuna. I understand about development and creating the right atmosphere for Asuna to give in to Inoda's persuasion, but that's what the first part was all about. These are just my thoughts and impressions of the second part;)

个人来讲，单论这期，按摩，忏悔室这些剧情的循序渐进设定，期待感是吊足了，只不过，期待感吊足的同时，又没有在其它地方，得到太多满足感。不过也谈不上失望就是了，与猪田的互动，还是很优秀的，尤其是啦啦队口号。

I am personally very satisfied with this update. You are one of the best solo devs out there, and have an amazing work ethic!

浅大 其他玩家我不清楚 不过其实我个人是可以接受做够了一星期份后再更新的 也就是差不多1个月半或2个月更新一part都可以的 这样的话最少浅大你做游戏时可能不会那么赶 也能比较完善剧情和cg 偶尔给个通知让我们知道进度就行 毕竟内容多的话也能玩的比较爽 ps:先在这里对浅大和各位玩家说声抱歉 以上代表我个人想法 我也不知道我这样提会不会给浅大你带来麻烦 但还是希望浅大你能考虑看看 谢谢

你更的这版我原本就觉得内容少 没打算玩 不清楚具体吵架情况，不过我提前祝你新年好，祝新年身体健康，多多赚米

Its perfectly fine with slow progress which builds up sexual frustration, unsatisfaction and negative feelings toward MC(Kirito) I love it before a fall and slow fall like having sex already, but not admitting feelings or/and making excuses. I think there was a lot of work put in Kirito - Asuna CG's + Sugu and it made Asuna see and experience that soon will be used to refuse Kirito and look around(Inoda). I think for battle oriented game Inoda might be too weak, because of his ability, that could evolve in various ways not only invisibility. Like some incubus power, but not straight hypnotize. Also he could use some Alchemy or Artifacts made together with Liz for questing together when there will be more battle action gameplay. I liked how Kirito encountered Hebishima, but I guess he won't allow him to join party with his attitude towards him, but occasionally he could encounter him while he is doing something with Leafa or Sinon or encounter on same quest that could lead to behind door action and stimulation for corruption progress. And, but of course everyone wants more sex scenes and worried that they will not have much because of slow progress.

The slow corruption/progression is good. What can be improved here is to make it seem more natural. As it is now, it feels like the story needs to justify to the player why it happens in those long dialogues. I am thinking the events between Asuna and Inoda can be broke in two. One type of short event that happens more frequently (which can be setup by Liz in the game) and can be found by exploring the map, and the other type of event that is longer and serves to set up the next actions and serve as a payoff to the buildup where there are more dialogues and actions. I see why people are saying that events CGs seem more dull and reserved. At this point, the Asuna Inoda relation has regressed to a stage similar to Part 1, which makes sense taking into consideration the story. A short-term fix would be to provide content with the other female characters where the corruption progress can be taken further and faster while keeping the justification of it more light, or set it up to be a natural progression. There is a good opportunity to develop the story of the side female characters in separate plot lines until more remarkable progress can be made in the main story of Asuna.

Even tho it might be repeating steps from part 1 I dont mind the slow progression either. Asuna and Inoda took a huge step back after having sex so they need to build it up again. It is the slow progression, Asunas inner struggle and fall into perversion that is so enjoyable so jumping to much in the development would spoil it I think. Also more event should be viewed as Kirito ”behind the back” like in part 1 I feel. Like behind curtains, when he spied through the window and so on, were he only glimpses things. Other than that, keep up your awesome work and Thank you for an amazing game

我觉得最主要的是这种月卡制的色色游戏就不适合做成长线程的模式，色色本身就是靠激素刺激的短期快乐，让玩家在贤者模式还要代入角色去深入剧情是很困难的。长剧情的模式受限于月卡制形式，很多时候剧情到关键转折点了但工期到了不得不在一个很膈应的节点发布，导致前因后果交代不清人物角色显得别扭难堪，玩家也被寸止得难受。这次直叶和亚丝娜的割裂感也源于此。我不想抨击月卡制，毕竟这极大缓解了很多小作坊制作人的资金压力，但也确确实实严重绑架了制作人的创造性，如何在这两点之间找到平衡其实是需要整个游戏行业研究的严肃课题，毕竟大家也见到很多正经游戏在ea阶段被资方和玩家意见左右太严重自废武功的案例。可能最终要么浅大回到前几作经典的短平快模式，要么如果继续走长线程的话要不要考虑两月一更，至少保证每次更新的当期剧情逻辑能自圆其说，并且适当增加一些量大管饱的cg来满足大家最简单的愿望，第一部的聊天室和录像厅就是很好的折中。总之一定要不忘初心啊做黄油的大哥哥，我会一直支持的(ง •̀_•́)ง

I want things to be enjoyable from the POV of Kirito- so slow progress is fine. But I wonder if more scenes can be from Kirito's view- and involving asuna and suguha instead of the side characters.

I said it before, but I enjoyed this update. So thank you for all you do. You work fast enough as is, so I have no complaints and while there are things I like, I always urge you to take things at your own pace and follow your own vision. Thank you very much Fujino!

新年到了，大家和气生财。大大也该多休息，才能继续做出好的剧情和一级棒的CG。 个人是希望大大能以黄毛视角设计ntr游戏，那不管猪田再渣再猥琐我玩起来也不会有背德感，因为为了攻略女神一切都值得的XD

你做的已经很好了浅大大

I really enjoyed and love i like the slow progress on Asuna.. I'm really impatient for see her in the final way buuuut I really really love how she falls into the pervert situation Thanks for the amazing update

I personally don't see the point in attacking anyone. It's a game. If you don't want to read the dialogue just do what I do skip threw it. Also sorry if I sound like I'm attacking I'm not but I will apologize if it seems that way. Even without reading you know what to do and I like that and even if you don't you can wonder around until you figure it out. I like how simple and fun the game is. And I'll keep playing the game even after it's finished and I can't wait for the full release of the game were you get both part 1 and 2 together. If that happens. Or I'll just continue playing it like final fantasy replay part 1 and then part 2.

Thought it was a solid update. Haven't read others' comments, but from my viewpoint the game is solid and the content is proceeding at a decent clip. Congrats on your success so far, and looking forward to see what you come up with next.

I like the slow progression , and tbh having huge jumps in development would feel unnatural. Thanks for your work! ❤️