1st project

Ok, guys, let's talk about the manga The thing is, you can see that I did the sketches (the name) I even added ink to everything, but I just added gray tones to some of them. 

Now that a lot of time passed, I don't know if I should continue it or not, or do another one overall.

(I even feel that the script is kind of cringe, well it's hentai so it's ok(?)...)

I think my style looks a little better now and I think I did, in some parts of this one, too poorly.  

So , here you go :

https://www.mediafire.com/file/jd9egh2tkln94kr/bitchy_milf.zip/file

I want you guys to read it and tell me, should I do another one (this time with less pages) or should I continue this one but editing it a little so it doesn't seems too poorly 

It's important to me your feedback, I'll open a poll tomorrow.