May 13, 2016
some ecchi
# 3
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Badgermushroom · May 16, 2016
Does Korra and Asami go to the same school? I remember you did some schoolgirl stuff with them. Might be too late but: "Like if she's... poisoned" -> "As if she's... poisoned." "All you need is an impulse" - you could replace "impluse" with a synonym, but maybe better to say "All you need is a kick start!" -BM
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Flick · May 17, 2016
No, this school is only for DC) Thanks!
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Andrew · May 13, 2016
Nice comic! Acrobatics is about learning how to fall safely, and he definitely did that! Couple of minor fixes - panel 1 "...stop moping and..." and panel 2 "...need is an impulse!"
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Flick · May 15, 2016
Thanks! Corrected.
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Smiling_Jack · May 13, 2016
Well that escalated quickly. From "I can't talk to her" to "Hands on boobs and face in cooch" as a form of 'Hello'
