September 18, 2020
Commissars 2
One more scetch about commissar lady and commissar-cadet.
Let me know if there're mistakes in the text.
Comments (8)
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Psyvios · September 19, 2020
This might be my new favourite thing you've made
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Chordat · September 18, 2020
shorthand for "sergeant" is "sarge", not "serg". And "We're in place" would work better as "we're here" or "we made it". Other than that, it's good.
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Flick · September 18, 2020
Ok, thanks
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Paulus Domitius · September 18, 2020
She took a good boy as pupil.
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Crowe-le-retour · September 18, 2020
Haaaa, i was so hoping she ask some warm in her bed ;). But it's so cute :)
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PhilosoShy · September 18, 2020
NICE! What Service! SUCH LOYALTY! Just makes us want to praise the emperor!
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Knorrn · September 18, 2020
Хмммм прекольно))))))) *продолжаю ждать фемдом в специальном полевом укреплении фетишисткого назначения*
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RoosterFish · September 18, 2020
That's how romances starts.