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Angry videogame daemonette of Slaanesh.
Let me know about mistakes in the text.
Comments (9)
I think you may want to consider having your character say "I fucked your mom" instead of "I fuck your mom!
I think you should say "My Monitor! That's the third one this week!"
"third on the week" i think you meant "Third one this week" or "That's the third one this week" but i like the drawing. their are quite a few odd choices in your dialog that betray the fact English is not your first language. you're doing a good job, its just not typical to phrase things like that. no hate, love your art.
Thanks! Yeah, my English's worst. Could you say where the odd choices and how to fix them?
That is adorable. XD
Thanks!
Heh nice...minor suggestion but "third one this week"
Thanks
The simple answer is she needs to pray to Slaanesh for tentacles. They are the multipurpose tool for all situations.
